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Minecraft skywars map CLOUDS! :D

Discussion in 'Suggestions' started by Lucioo, Apr 9, 2015.

  1. Lucioo

    Lucioo Member

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    hey guys,
    i just made a skywars map for the cube server.
    here is a screenshot please let me know what you think about this and suggestions and if you (admins/owners) wanna add the map. Schermafbeelding 2015-04-09 om 15.06.39.png
    PS: you can still see the ground etc. thats because it's my single player world.
     
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    Soph Sr. Mod Staff Member Sr. Moderator

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    The islands look a little too small to play on
     
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    Very good effort, but you only have about 6 blocks to walk around on. Try increasing the size of the islands.
     
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    Okay, like everyone said, the islands are too small. Also, the map is way too small. If someone were to choose OP and get a Punch bow, if people didn't camp, everyone would be sniped off immediately.
     
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    The middle looks the same as the middle in Galaxy.
     
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    It is a nice idea. But you´ve missed to add the right detail. You´ve tried using different block such a wool, glass and glowstone to give us some variety but it is missing something.

    As others said. The island are too small. I personally think it is better to make them too small than to big because then you can "easily" expand them a bit :)
    The raindrops and the snowflakes look way to clumsy. It is just a bunch of blocks falling from the other huge block which is supposed to be a cloud. My idea would be to make the clouds bigger so it doesn´t look like a cloud with some random blocks underneath ;) The clouds with the lightnings look pretty nice. But make them bigger like the other ones and maybe use some glass instead of all the glowstone.

    The middle could be a bit bigger. I assume that it is a sun. You´ve basically build a "ball" and then you´ve added some "arms" to it. It reminds me of a sea star to be honest :p
    I´d suggest to lift the whole map higher up so you can make the sun look more sunny-like. It kinda looks like you´ve built a 2D sun. We want a 3D one ;D
     
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    Looks nice, but yeah what the others say a little bit bigger :)
     
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    The islands have a real cute design, almost cartoony. There's definitely potential for a map like this, but it's just a little too small. What I would suggest is making the clouds bigger and maybe possibly turning it into a map for Super Craft Bros instead. Here's a quick chart detailing our need for maps.
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    As you can see, we have about a bajillion Skywars map submissions. We're not gonna need new maps for a looooooooong time, so unless your map literally makes us froth at the mouth with excitement, it's very unlikely that it'll get added.
     
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    You know what's funny, there are so many negative ratings on this map but it got in and is my fav! good job Lucioo
     
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    i'll try, i think i made him complete by monday, I hope you like it then but thanks for already so many nice comments! :D
     
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    You can also go down in your island and build a wall etc. :p
    If someone chooses OP and your punch is useless than is it not cool to have punch xD.
     
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    I wouldn't consider it negative, since these are opinions of people. If you want your map to be submitted then other people will have to tell you what to improve.

    On Topic: I really like the idea of the map, I have never seen something like that before.
     
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    The lightning and rain looks a bit off, and it's pretty small, and the mids very similar to the galaxy one just worse (no offence). Apart, from that, awesome/
     
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    Thank you, i'm working of improving the "rain" and i'm making the islands bigger! :D
     
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    probably because it is easier to make a skywars map since you dont need to do a ton of terraforming and for the stones with 1 plot it can fit on it easily :)
     
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    There's rain in space?
     
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    who said it was in space?
     
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    yeah, haha because go the sun who's so close.
    but i didn't know what i otherwise should do in the mid :p.
     
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    Hey guys, here is again a new update of this map! thanks again for the tips and the compliments!
    in this update:
    - the islands are bigger
    - the rain spots are now real floating pieces of water
    - there is (unrealistic) wood in the clouds

    Please if you see things to be improved or if you think this map is AWESOME let me know it!

    Night time:
     
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    sorry i accidentally clicked enter.
    Night time:
    Schermafbeelding 2015-04-11 om 15.40.46.png

    Day time:
    Schermafbeelding 2015-04-11 om 15.40.56.png
     
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