Minecraft skywars map CLOUDS! :D

[Lucioo]

hey guys,
i just made a skywars map for the cube server.
here is a screenshot please let me know what you think about this and suggestions and if you (admins/owners) wanna add the map.

PS: you can still see the ground etc. thats because it's my single player world.

 

[Soph]

The islands look a little too small to play on

 

[Sophie]

Very good effort, but you only have about 6 blocks to walk around on. Try increasing the size of the islands.

 

[SevereWarning]

Okay, like everyone said, the islands are too small. Also, the map is way too small. If someone were to choose OP and get a Punch bow, if people didn't camp, everyone would be sniped off immediately.

 

[Noodles77]

The middle looks the same as the middle in Galaxy.

 

[Saradabaschi]

It is a nice idea. But you´ve missed to add the right detail. You´ve tried using different block such a wool, glass and glowstone to give us some variety but it is missing something.

As others said. The island are too small. I personally think it is better to make them too small than to big because then you can "easily" expand them a bit :)
The raindrops and the snowflakes look way to clumsy. It is just a bunch of blocks falling from the other huge block which is supposed to be a cloud. My idea would be to make the clouds bigger so it doesn´t look like a cloud with some random blocks underneath ;) The clouds with the lightnings look pretty nice. But make them bigger like the other ones and maybe use some glass instead of all the glowstone.

The middle could be a bit bigger. I assume that it is a sun. You´ve basically build a "ball" and then you´ve added some "arms" to it. It reminds me of a sea star to be honest :P
I´d suggest to lift the whole map higher up so you can make the sun look more sunny-like. It kinda looks like you´ve built a 2D sun. We want a 3D one ;D

 

[InfinityTess]

Looks nice, but yeah what the others say a little bit bigger :)

 

[Tacosbefriends]

The islands have a real cute design, almost cartoony. There's definitely potential for a map like this, but it's just a little too small. What I would suggest is making the clouds bigger and maybe possibly turning it into a map for Super Craft Bros instead. Here's a quick chart detailing our need for maps.

As you can see, we have about a bajillion Skywars map submissions. We're not gonna need new maps for a looooooooong time, so unless your map literally makes us froth at the mouth with excitement, it's very unlikely that it'll get added.

 

[Joshmctosh]

You know what's funny, there are so many negative ratings on this map but it got in and is my fav! good job Lucioo

 

[Lucioo]

It is a nice idea. But you´ve missed to add the right detail. You´ve tried using different block such a wool, glass and glowstone to give us some variety but it is missing something.

As others said. The island are too small. I personally think it is better to make them too small than to big because then you can "easily" expand them a bit :)
The raindrops and the snowflakes look way to clumsy. It is just a bunch of blocks falling from the other huge block which is supposed to be a cloud. My idea would be to make the clouds bigger so it doesn´t look like a cloud with some random blocks underneath ;) The clouds with the lightnings look pretty nice. But make them bigger like the other ones and maybe use some glass instead of all the glowstone.

The middle could be a bit bigger. I assume that it is a sun. You´ve basically build a "ball" and then you´ve added some "arms" to it. It reminds me of a sea star to be honest :p
I´d suggest to lift the whole map higher up so you can make the sun look more sunny-like. It kinda looks like you´ve built a 2D sun. We want a 3D one ;D

i'll try, i think i made him complete by monday, I hope you like it then but thanks for already so many nice comments! :D

 

[Lucioo]

Okay, like everyone said, the islands are too small. Also, the map is way too small. If someone were to choose OP and get a Punch bow, if people didn't camp, everyone would be sniped off immediately.

You can also go down in your island and build a wall etc. :P
If someone chooses OP and your punch is useless than is it not cool to have punch xD.

 

[Sevenade78]

You know what's funny, there are so many negative ratings on this map but it got in and is my fav! good job Lucioo

I wouldn't consider it negative, since these are opinions of people. If you want your map to be submitted then other people will have to tell you what to improve.

On Topic: I really like the idea of the map, I have never seen something like that before.

 

[Colourlight]

The lightning and rain looks a bit off, and it's pretty small, and the mids very similar to the galaxy one just worse (no offence). Apart, from that, awesome/

 

[Lucioo]

I wouldn't consider it negative, since these are opinions of people. If you want your map to be submitted then other people will have to tell you what to improve.

On Topic: I really like the idea of the map, I have never seen something like that before.

Thank you, i'm working of improving the "rain" and i'm making the islands bigger! :D

 

[Pingu_]

The islands have a real cute design, almost cartoony. There's definitely potential for a map like this, but it's just a little too small. What I would suggest is making the clouds bigger and maybe possibly turning it into a map for Super Craft Bros instead. Here's a quick chart detailing our need for maps.

As you can see, we have about a bajillion Skywars map submissions. We're not gonna need new maps for a looooooooong time, so unless your map literally makes us froth at the mouth with excitement, it's very unlikely that it'll get added.

probably because it is easier to make a skywars map since you dont need to do a ton of terraforming and for the stones with 1 plot it can fit on it easily :)

 

[Joshmctosh]

Thank you, i'm working of improving the "rain" and i'm making the islands bigger! :D

There's rain in space?

 

[Pingu_]

There's rain in space?

who said it was in space?

 

[Lucioo]

who said it was in space?

yeah, haha because go the sun who's so close.
but i didn't know what i otherwise should do in the mid :P.

 

[Lucioo]

Hey guys, here is again a new update of this map! thanks again for the tips and the compliments!
in this update:
- the islands are bigger
- the rain spots are now real floating pieces of water
- there is (unrealistic) wood in the clouds

Please if you see things to be improved or if you think this map is AWESOME let me know it!

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[Lucioo]

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