Video Eggwars - Cinematic Video | Need Feedback

[Jackxist]

Topic
So I have made a cinematic video on eggwars team on the map forest and got a good TNT cannon kill and I am planning to maker another cinematic video. But I want to make it good so if anyone can just view this video and let me know what I need to work on to make it better and also keep in mind this is the first time I used the software to make that so I need as much feedback as I can get to make it better.

The Related Video/s

New cinematic thread made here: https://www.cubecraft.net/threads/eggwars-new-cinematic-video-what-do-you-think.184647/

 

[PyjamaBanana]

Cool I like it! <3

 

[Jackxist]

Cool I like it! <3

It does need work I know but I need to know from you what can be changed to make it look better. There has to be something

 

[Geert Wilders]

Nice

 

[Jackxist]

Nice

Thankyou, do you have any feedback so I can improve it?

 

[Gainfullterror]

Holy crap that was actually a really sick kill!

 

[Twann]

Awsome! :)

 

[Guinchuu]

Woooooww :eek: Awesome!! Nice jobb :P

:)

 

[Jackxist]

Holy crap that was actually a really sick kill!

Thanks dude, is there anything I can improve on?

 

[Jackxist]

Awsome! :)

Thanks. I was planning on working on a second one but is there any improvements you think I should make?

 

[Jackxist]

Woooooww :eek: Awesome!! Nice jobb :p

:)

Thankyou, I really appreciate the feedback, Do you personally think there is anything else I can work on for the second one I am making

 

[Gainfullterror]

Thanks dude, is there anything I can improve on?

The only thing I could say you can improve on, is trying not to die as much in a game. It's a lot to ask, but it's very optional.

 

[Jackxist]

The only thing I could say you can improve on, is trying not to die as much in a game. It's a lot to ask, but it's very optional.

:) I will try

 

[Henkle]

nice video. my only criticism is the high FOV. it works great if you're playing the game but for a cinematic like this it makes it quite difficult to watch.

 

[Jackxist]

nice video. my only criticism is the high FOV. it works great if you're playing the game but for a cinematic like this it makes it quite difficult to watch.

ok - Thanks for the feedback

 

[NO USE]

HOW!!!!!

 

[Jackxist]

HOW!!!!!

It takes time and work and thanks for liking it :)

 

[MidnightMailman]

Overall well done, honestly, I would do a highlight style video if you want it to appear like that. I mean it was a 3-minute video, but the epic part was limited to very small amounts. like only about 1/3 of that video. Thus if you did multiple games and then just kept all of the epic parts. then that would be ideal. if you would like to do a whole game like that, a voice over with the music would be better. If you don't mind me asking, what is the software you are using?

 

[Jackxist]

Overall well done, honestly, I would do a highlight style video if you want it to appear like that. I mean it was a 3-minute video, but the epic part was limited to very small amounts. like only about 1/3 of that video. Thus if you did multiple games and then just kept all of the epic parts. then that would be ideal. if you would like to do a whole game like that, a voice over with the music would be better. If you don't mind me asking, what is the software you are using?

Thanks for the feedback, I use the replay mod

 

[TheBlackMoon]

Nice! :oops: