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Suggestions for my first ever (not made at school) book! :D

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  1. Catzore <3 Taco's

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    This is gonna be my first ever book that i made! So please no rude or "You could have set this at your status" comments because i need some help here ;-;. Btw they all live on this land called MoonJungle. So the book is about a cat named Eclipse who is the mother of a son and daughter. The sons name is Solar and the daughters is Lunar. They had a father named Chaos but he was always setting up more caves for the "Dinosaur cats" (no h8 i already have like 2 dinosaur cats drawn) and planting sunflowers/moonflowers (sunflowers in day and moonflowers in night). But somehow a huge tradegy happens where Solar becomes evil and and starts spreading fire everywhere and its way more interesting if i actually make the book xD (This is where i need help). Can you guys think of how Solar becomes evil? because my ideas are bad xD. So Solar starts spreading fire everywhere and Eclipse and Lunar and everyone else in MoonJungle are in great danger because Solar is just impossible to stop because he has this great power that nobody else has. You would think Eclipse would because she is sun and moon and Eclipse has a different fire power. There is also an rogue in MoonJungle who has another friend which is a rogue makes it even harder for MoonJungle. But sometimes Eclipse looks through the fire and sees a white and grey cat with a black hood covering his face just staring..... nobody knows his name and his friends name but everyone is scared of these rogues BUT the rogue is known has the SoulHunter but that is not his real name. His friends name is known as the ClawHunter. These rogues are very suspicous and are always looking at Solar while he destroys the kingdom of Eclipse and Lunar and turns it all into a fire kingdom. One thing about Solar is that he cant cry and when he does it just hurts him.
    So i need ideas of how Solar will become good again but it has to be dramatic.
    Of course if you have any edits/ideas to add to the "blueprint" of the story you may :3
    (PS. im gonna post all the drawing i did of the characters) :DDD
    -Cet
     
  2. Catzore <3 Taco's

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    image.jpg image.jpg image.jpg image.jpg image.jpg Not too happy about the Soul
    Catchers hood though
     
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    The drawings are really impressive. You got talent. :)
     
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    Er xD
     
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    ^^ :p
     
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    What in the 8 worlds...
     
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    Divines* ^-^
     
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    Umm? instead of saying something that could pretty much means u think my book is weird how about u help me instead? -.-
     
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    If I think it's weird then why would I help? That'd be like carrying a dead horse to the races.
     
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    You helped me.
     
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    Did... did you say.. CATS!?!??!?
     
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    Yes.....