[Skywars Map] Clocks - (12 players)

Discussion in 'Minecraft Creations' started by FarielTV, Mar 13, 2015.

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  1. FarielTV

    FarielTV Member

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    Hey, i made this map with a friend and we hope you like it :)
    It's inspirated on clocks :p Theres 12 islands with 2 chests each and a center island with a enchantement table and 9 chests :)

    Here is a little timelapse of the construction, so you can see how we did it and prove that is ours and not fake :)
     
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    Excellent video and I really like the map!
     
  3. johnyestaloca

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    The idea is nice, but maybe add some more details on the islands?
     
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    I like how the player islands look like. But middle needs more detail. The clock in middle should have more of an 3D-effect.
    If you are building a hall clock do not just build a clockface above some wood. It also needs wood around it for example. But you could do way more with it.
    But the player islands remind me more of a modern clock which is why a hall clock wouldn´t really fit for middle?
     
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    I like this map, good job.
     
  6. SevereWarning

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    The middle area is quite flat, can you make the platform at a deeper depth?
     
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    The bottom halves of the island could really use some work. They look really... awkward. And the tops of the starter islands is really flat. There's not much cover (Which most people appreciate). The block pallet isn't very vast either. It seems to all be the same colors -- white, black, and a little dark brown. I'd try to add more color. Also, the layout of the islands, there's nothing interesting about going to the middle. All you would have to do here is build out and hope to make it. Take maps like Scare. The vines from the top of the islands created a unique and new way of thinking on how to get to the middle.
     
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    I like the idea, but improvements are pretty much what everyone else said.
     
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    I like the map and the cool edited video but you should consider adding some more detail to the centre of the map :)
     
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    Thanks for all these recommendations, im working on a 2.0 version of the map :)
     
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