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Skywars [Aura]

Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by tjibbe, Feb 12, 2016.

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am i good enought te be a builder?

  1. yes

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  2. no not now

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  1. tjibbe

    tjibbe Member

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    Hello this is a little sneak peak of my map Aura.
    Its only the middle but it is actually made for the open application for a new builder!
    so i hope you like it :) 2016-02-12_19.50.56.png 2016-02-12_19.51.04.png 2016-02-12_19.50.34.png 2016-02-12_19.50.29.png 2016-02-12_19.50.45.png 2016-02-12_19.50.21.png 2016-02-12_20.01.04.png
     

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    One thing I could recommend is working on your block palette and making smoother shapes, your circles that surround the entire thing are extremely harsh because you added stairs to every block, I recommend you stay away from that and try to make smoother looking shapes. As for your block palette it seems you went a little crazy and started using all the blocks, in some cases it looks amazing to do that, but in your case in such a small area black,brown,green,red,purple,pink,white,blue,etc sort of kills it. Once again with the shapes, with your dragon you made work on trying to make smoother edges so it doesn't look so harsh. These are my suggestions :) It's an OK map.

    This is all criticism to help you get better.:)
     
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    this are just foto's it really looks nicer if you are in the map
     
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    Looks awesome! What are you gona do as spawnislands?
     
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    I think about it , do you have a suggestion
     
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    Oml :3 Sick! I'd think I'd rather see this as a 2 player team skywars map though!
     
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    true
     
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    Wow this is good :p
     
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    I like it :)
     
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    Looks really good! Keep going :)
     
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    I want to use my (s)kill aura there
     
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    the map is almost finished
     
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    This looks great! Can't wait to play it ;)