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Samurai team egg wars updated

Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by JaMo33, Jul 16, 2016.

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Should this be added to cubecraft

Poll closed Jul 30, 2016.
  1. Yes

    78.6%
  2. No

    21.4%
  1. JaMo33

    JaMo33 Member

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    (just a quick heads up, i did take inspiration from videos and images online hope you like it)
    New to V2:
    New mid, new trees, updated island textures.
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    Hey everyone

    This map is set in a japanese culture with the temple of the samuri.i made this map to have 3 players per team. every island has:

    2 iron gens 1 lvl 2 and 1 broken
    1 gold gen lvl 1
    and 1 diamond gen (broken)

    In middle there are:
    2 iron gens 1 lvl 2 and 1 lvl 3
    2 gold gens 1 lvl 2 and 1 lvl 3
    and 2 diamond gens 1 lvl 1 and 1 lvl 2

    Take a look at the images and tell me what you think.

    Thanks J@Mo

    @Efcluke94
    @HuracanFTW
    @Alex_de_Grote
     
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    zRinne Mod Staff Member Moderator

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    Great improvement compared to the first edition. I really like how you changed the middle the most.
    Trees improved but the ones in the middle could have a little more volume (You don't really need to make a new thread for improvements :D)
    Overall, better than the first.
     
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  3. MartijnMC

    MartijnMC Builder Staff Member Builder

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    I like it, but I think you could improve some things about the map. For example: add more flat terrain on the islands, that way there is much more space for pvp. You could also add more details to the buildings. Maybe try to mix up some blocks of the same colour. I think it's a little too simple for Cubecraft, but over all it's a nice map ;)
     
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    I like it, but it would be better if you made the arch structures to be made out of red clay, due to the wool seems like an uncommon material for that type of structure. You want to building to look realistic, so I would use hard materials and not soft ones like wool for the main material on structures. Other than that, I believe it has potential, and some of the points said above I agree with also.

    I'm voting "no" as I believe it still needs improvements.
     
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    thx for the feedback and congrats on mushrooms
     
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    Great Improvement...
    Like it more this way..
    Did you consider yourself making those ports out of Red Clay? Just a Suggestion It looks awesome...
     
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    thx for the feedback while i was building it i did try to use clay but i felt like it wasnt very viberant and woll showed more colour but thx anyway!
     
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    Yeah, I understand that it might not look colourful, but you also need it to look realistic.

    Have you tried the red nether brick from 1.10?
     
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    ok here it is 2016-07-16_20.01.48.png
     
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    i ha
    I have doesnt work at all XD
     
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    You've tried all of the new red 1.10 blocks? I still think that the clay is the best option. I believe that Cubecraft would agree, to make it look real.
     
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    Thanks and no problem. I hope you'll keep on making maps for Cubecraft cause I really like your building style and with some improvements you could definitely make a map that will be good enough for Cubecraft :)
     
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    thank it means a lot to come from a map creator;)
     
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    Nice Map but....

    You need to have unique blocks to determine which island the color is
     
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    i thought the same when i was making the map but trust me when your in the map it stands out vey clearly but thx for the feedback
     
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    Wool? WOOL!?!

    I like it in general, but I would recommend that you replace the wool with hardened clay.
     
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    It looks alot better than before but why is the mid made out of wood and the other island out red/yellow clay? xD
     
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    I think that the wood needs to represent gold... IDK...
     
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    i don't think so