Builds My first ever map

[CookiesAlwaysWin]

Hi.

This is just a rlly fast build map (build this in like 2hours)
This is my FIRST ever map created xd
I know its bad! xd
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I just learned voxelsniper xd
So enjoy!
XD



Tried making a eggwars map

 

[JerrySox]

If you would have taken more time this would like a lot better. Otherwise not bad for two hours.

 

[CookiesAlwaysWin]

I need to learn ALOT more for voxelsniper etc

 

[Power Ranger]

Looks ok for 2 hours :P If it were to become a real eggwars map you would probably want to remove the double tall grass since its really annoying in pvp :3

 

[ISTY.]

I think you should add more detail, but so far so good, and also, I forgot the name of it, but it reminds of a skywars map. Good job for only building it in 2 hours

 

[matcha]

I think you should add more detail, but so far so good, and also, I forgot the name of it, but it reminds of a skywars map. Good job for only building it in 2 hours

Trees?

 

[Lepzi]

Wow this is amazing man I really like it if you haven't already you should apply for builder you would have a good chance.

 

[xXNiChO_29Xx]

I guess not bad for two hours but if you want a good make dedicate more time and make some good details ^^
Otherwise, good! :)

 

[Marieke2001]

You used saplings for the trees at the middle. A tip: make trees without the saplings. Do it yourself, that looks way prettier. You're map is cool, but it hasn't much detail and it's just grass and trees.

 

[ISTY.]

Trees?

Yes, probably I don't really play skywars much

 

[CookiesAlwaysWin]

Wow this is amazing man I really like it if you haven't already you should apply for builder you would have a good chance.

Thx for the Nice comment but This is not enough XD

You used saplings for the trees at the middle. A tip: make trees without the saplings. Do it yourself, that looks way prettier. You're map is cool, but it hasn't much detail and it's just grass and trees.

Ok. :p

 

[Proditio]

Everyone is saying that you need more detail (which would be nice) but what I think you really need is a theme. What you have is a pretty field of grass with some trees, you need something that the players will remember the map by, something that makes it stand out. hope this helps :D

 

[Proditio]

Everyone is saying that you need more detail (which would be nice) but what I think you really need is a theme. What you have is a pretty field of grass with some trees, you need something that the players will remember the map by, something that makes it stand out. hope this helps :D

Forgot to say, but I do think for what you have don it looks nice, just cold be better.

 

[Yamin]

It's a good begin, but like others said: it needss more work and time.
Make it a bit more organic: the trees are kinds squares and the islands could also use some improvements.

You can try /b bb to smooth the islands a bit better.
When I make trees I use diamond for the tree itself and gold for the leaves, that way I can get good shapes for my trees. Maybe try that.

Keep it up and keep building!

 

[Fristey]

It's simple, but not bad :P

 

[KidBit]

i like this map i would play it

 

[Golapagos]

Its trees... no water for me to swim in, so i will die q-q. Just kidding! Its a nice map, and a vey good one for your first and for 2 hours! Keep up the good work!

 

[Cubo ㅤ]

Wow this is amazing man I really like it if you haven't already you should apply for builder you would have a good chance.

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[Proditio]

Its trees... no water for me to swim in, so i will die q-q. Just kidding! Its a nice map, and a vey good one for your first and for 2 hours! Keep up the good work!

why dont any egg war maps really have any water besides ports?

 

[Ellie Williams]

The terrain looks too flat and you should probably use custom trees in the middle island, other than that, good job !