Builds [DUELS ARENA] - Valley

[Nutuu]

<Note: I'm not a master>
I voted no, sorry;

The snow, annoying non-fullblocks, and I think it could have pretty much more space for pvp. On the ends there are the hills, which probably encourage camping.
Also the middle hill, you can get on top of it easily (unless there is a height limit)
I like that there is grass and flowers, but flowers can't be destroyed by placing a block on it, but grass can.
I think there could be dirt or something under the grass on the terrain to make it look smoother (my opinion)
On some parts of the river it looks like you repeat the same pattern of the glass, and I'd use only 1-2 different class colors to make it look smoother.
Overall, I think the map looks nice but I won't play it.
edit: full wood logs would make the trees look a bit smoother, for example 17:14 for birch

 

[ImJunior]

@Nutuu I removed the flowers that were on the PvP field, I changed the 5 sorts of glass I used in the river to two glass sorts. I also tried removing the pattern.

 

[Nutuu]

@Nutuu I removed the flowers that were on the PvP field, I changed the 5 sorts of glass I used in the river to two glass sorts. I also tried removing the pattern.

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I don't think concrete exists in 1.9? just noticed sorry

 

[ImJunior]

I don't think concrete exists in 1.9? just noticed sorry

Changed it :)

 

[ImJunior]

@_The13thDoctor_ I changed most of the things that you suggested. @Andyyy I remade the pictures without shaders on.

 

[Finixly]

I added more detail to the arch, do you think it looks better now? @Finixly

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ah yes

 

[its_Marto03]

The truth is that those maps may belong perfectly to some cubecraft map, so I think they are so amazing!
Congratulations!

 

[ImJunior]

The truth is that those maps may belong perfectly to some cubecraft map, so I think they are so amazing!
Congratulations!

Thank you :)

 

[Yamin]

Hey, thanks for taking the time to create a map submission. I actually liked the snow version better, but there was a lot of ice and snow in there.
For your first map this is looking pretty good, but I don't think it is there yet.

The whole map looks a bit too 'spammy' to me:
the walls aren't really smooth, even if you went for a more cliff like wall it still looks too random. the
There are a lot of slabs used in the terraforming which looks weird. The arch in the middle looks also odd and unrealistic.

I don't think the map is what we're looking for, but again, for your first map it's really good.