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sasemboy

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2016-01-08_23.34.40.png 2016-01-08_23.34.33.png 2016-01-08_23.34.19.png This food-themed map is built by sasemboy and Erik378. There isn't a mid, but there are many other islands were you don't spawn instead. 8 players can play the map. If you accept the map i will send the zip file to your skype/email/whatever.
 
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Younisco

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Overall, it needs a lot of work. First of all, don't build pixelart unless it's to compliment the build. The melon - if it's what you're trying to achieve - needs to be 3D. Why is there cake on chicken? And a random lava ritual demonic structure looking thing...? If you try and fixate on the theme a bit more, and create terrain to accompany it, it might be good :)
 

sasemboy

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Overall, it needs a lot of work. First of all, don't build pixelart unless it's to compliment the build. The melon - if it's what you're trying to achieve - needs to be 3D. Why is there cake on chicken? And a random lava ritual demonic structure looking thing...? If you try and fixate on the theme a bit more, and create terrain to accompany it, it might be good :)
ok, thanks for your reply! im going to edit it for a bit.
 
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Younisco

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Okayyy, now it's starting to take shape :D

1) Make the watermelon have more of a shape.
2) Possible terrain underneath.
3) Still don't understand the hay on the cake....
 

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The maps kinda messy as I can't really see a middle "main" island. Try to have the outer islands all in a circular shape and a main one in the middle. Nice idea though.
 

ImABubbleHead

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The theme is good, however it's all a bit random and lacks structural image. At the moment it looks like a scatter of floating foods. xd

The maps kinda messy as I can't really see a middle "main" island. Try to have the outer islands all in a circular shape and a main one in the middle. Nice idea though.

^^^
 

sasemboy

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Okayyy, now it's starting to take shape :D

1) Make the watermelon have more of a shape.
2) Possible terrain underneath.
3) Still don't understand the hay on the cake....
-----> you can make a hay block with 9 wheat, and you can make a cake with wheat. Now you understand? It's a little farm...

The theme is good, however it's all a bit random and lacks structural image. At the moment it looks like a scatter of floating foods. xd

^^^
xd youre right
 

tiger101tiger

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....Maybe its a better idea to create a new skywars map...:oops:
Don't give up! Just keep working at it and it will become perfect! CCGN builders work extremely hard on skywars maps, so just keep tweaking stuff a little bit at a time, and then it will become an amazing skywars map.
Here is a suggestion on how to make it better from me:
  • only make 3 different types of islands
  • There should be a middle. for example: a salad bowl with different fruits in it
  • don't use the island with the hay and cake, because it gives whoever gets that island an advantage with endless amounts of food
  • don't use the island with lots of melon blocks, for the same reason as the hay and cake island
  • Instead of having the carrots behind the islands, make them a midway mark to the center.
That's all of the suggestions I have, so keep trying and it will become amazing!
 

sasemboy

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Don't give up! Just keep working at it and it will become perfect! CCGN builders work extremely hard on skywars maps, so just keep tweaking stuff a little bit at a time, and then it will become an amazing skywars map.
Here is a suggestion on how to make it better from me:
  • only make 3 different types of islands
  • There should be a middle. for example: a salad bowl with different fruits in it
  • don't use the island with the hay and cake, because it gives whoever gets that island an advantage with endless amounts of food
  • don't use the island with lots of melon blocks, for the same reason as the hay and cake island
  • Instead of having the carrots behind the islands, make them a midway mark to the center.
That's all of the suggestions I have, so keep trying and it will become amazing!
I have recreated the map! I'm going to start a new map suggestion! Link: Click here.
 
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