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Skywars map: food

Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by sasemboy, Jan 8, 2016.

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Do you want to play this map???

Poll closed Jan 15, 2016.
  1. No

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  2. Yes

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  1. sasemboy

    sasemboy Member

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    2016-01-08_23.33.51.png 2016-01-08_23.34.08.png 2016-01-08_23.34.33.png 2016-01-08_23.35.10.png 2016-01-08_23.34.40.png 2016-01-08_23.34.33.png 2016-01-08_23.34.19.png This food-themed map is built by sasemboy and Erik378. There isn't a mid, but there are many other islands were you don't spawn instead. 8 players can play the map. If you accept the map i will send the zip file to your skype/email/whatever.
     
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  2. YounB

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    Overall, it needs a lot of work. First of all, don't build pixelart unless it's to compliment the build. The melon - if it's what you're trying to achieve - needs to be 3D. Why is there cake on chicken? And a random lava ritual demonic structure looking thing...? If you try and fixate on the theme a bit more, and create terrain to accompany it, it might be good :)
     
  3. sasemboy

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    ok, thanks for your reply! im going to edit it for a bit.
     
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    The screenshots are now changed! 2016-01-08_23.40.25.png <---- cake island
    2016-01-08_23.40.04.png <----- the melons are now in 3d
    2016-01-08_23.39.59.png <------ the "random lava ritual demonic structure looking thing" is now a pumpkin pie
     
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    Okayyy, now it's starting to take shape :D

    1) Make the watermelon have more of a shape.
    2) Possible terrain underneath.
    3) Still don't understand the hay on the cake....
     
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    The maps kinda messy as I can't really see a middle "main" island. Try to have the outer islands all in a circular shape and a main one in the middle. Nice idea though.
     
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    The theme is good, however it's all a bit random and lacks structural image. At the moment it looks like a scatter of floating foods. xd

    ^^^
     
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    I think it is a good idea, but it needs more work. I'm not good at building skywars maps, so I cant help you with it.
     
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    -----> you can make a hay block with 9 wheat, and you can make a cake with wheat. Now you understand? It's a little farm...

    xd youre right
     
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    Maybe it isn't a better idea to make a new skywars map
     
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    Don't give up! Just keep working at it and it will become perfect! CCGN builders work extremely hard on skywars maps, so just keep tweaking stuff a little bit at a time, and then it will become an amazing skywars map.
    Here is a suggestion on how to make it better from me:
    • only make 3 different types of islands
    • There should be a middle. for example: a salad bowl with different fruits in it
    • don't use the island with the hay and cake, because it gives whoever gets that island an advantage with endless amounts of food
    • don't use the island with lots of melon blocks, for the same reason as the hay and cake island
    • Instead of having the carrots behind the islands, make them a midway mark to the center.
    That's all of the suggestions I have, so keep trying and it will become amazing!
     
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    ok, i've changed my message.
     
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    Every time people add random +1's so now it's my time: +1
     
  14. sasemboy

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    I have recreated the map! I'm going to start a new map suggestion! Link: Click here.
     
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    Okey. Its bad sorry :(.
    1) Create a mid
    2) Put ores in some fruits
     
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    3) 8? Pls bests is 12 oke?