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My new creation! :P

Discussion in 'Minecraft Creations' started by Guinchuu, Nov 22, 2016.

  1. Guinchuu

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    Hi cubecrafters!
    Today I come to show you a small lobby made for the server that I help at the moment (w ith the help of another builder). I hope you like it and that you give me all the advice that you can think of! All to improve! Thanks for your attention!
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    Looks nice, but the terrain is a bit bland and looks like you only used //replace for the randomising, The buildings are copied over and over again,
    The side islands are cones with Voxel type shapes IMO.
    But it can trick any regular player into thinking it's a fantastic build, so +0.5 on my part!

    Disclaimer: I'm not saying it's bad, but I'm saying that you didn't put as much effort into it as what it actually looks like. I probably cannot even make anything looking better than this.
     
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    dont listen to him it looks awesome i love it
     
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    You really are right! And it is not for me to cover, but I have not done everything ... and I hope to continue improving the construction! Let's say it's 50% Thank you!
     
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    I'm not an expert on building...far from it in fact, but I think replacing the diamond blocks on the roofs with Prismarine would give the build that worn medieval look that you are going for, hope I helped this build looks solid just needs some work ;)
     
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    It looks really nice!
    But like @Pandrai said: maybe replace the diamon blocks with Prismarine, maybe: the diamond blocks look cool.
     
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    Looks nice!
     
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    Uhmm hello sir, it's called constructive criticism.
    It's what artists use to improve.
    If you think you can build in Minecraft and not being criticized then you can give up already.

    It might look good, but it does have its flaws and there is ALWAYS a way to improve in art and thus Minecraft building.
    So even though you love it and you think it looks "awesome" an experienced builder with more capabilities actually wanting the mapmaker to improve pointed out the main flaws of it.

    100% listen to @Gainfullterror .
     
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    Im so jealous!
     
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