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StopWalking

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Yoooo sup, Im grinding rn so yeah, enjoy. Feedback is always welcome :p
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Coool place in the 'south'
=^-^= Hey! =^-^=
The build overall is really good. I am not a structure builder myself therefore I wouldn't know what to really say.
I can see that the palette is quite simple. The colours compliment each other which is really good. I like the fact that there are no areas that are over-detailed. I can look at the build with ease. The trees are okay, I feel that the coverage of leaves could be better they look very bare. Are they meant to be pine trees? Maybe use a darker wood like spruce as well, This can give the build a bit more contrast between the environment.

The only main thing I really dislike are the lines of leaves over the build.
These I have never been a fan of. They don't look natural at all. If they were in a group this may be different but they just look odd and out of place. Maybe add some clumps of leaves to act like bushes instead? Leaves won't form like this naturally unless the building is abandoned and in that case, there would be broken areas and rubble. I don't think this is the type of theme you are going with.

So overall, this build is really good and I can see that you will have a future in working with creative mediums. There are just a few tweaks that may make it a bit more pretty if you understand my concepts.


~Reindeer~
 

StopWalking

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=^-^= Hey! =^-^=
The build overall is really good. I am not a structure builder myself therefore I wouldn't know what to really say.
I can see that the palette is quite simple. The colours compliment each other which is really good. I like the fact that there are no areas that are over-detailed. I can look at the build with ease. The trees are okay, I feel that the coverage of leaves could be better they look very bare. Are they meant to be pine trees? Maybe use a darker wood like spruce as well, This can give the build a bit more contrast between the environment.

The only main thing I really dislike are the lines of leaves over the build.
These I have never been a fan of. They don't look natural at all. If they were in a group this may be different but they just look odd and out of place. Maybe add some clumps of leaves to act like bushes instead? Leaves won't form like this naturally unless the building is abandoned and in that case, there would be broken areas and rubble. I don't think this is the type of theme you are going with.

So overall, this build is really good and I can see that you will have a future in working with creative mediums. There are just a few tweaks that may make it a bit more pretty if you understand my concepts.


~Reindeer~

Yoo, I appreciate it that u took the time to write such a long message with great tips and stuff. These leaves are meant to add some extra detail, but I understand your reasons. Ill try and keep track of things like this in future structure builds.

Thanks
 
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