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Egg Wars Map - Towers (Updated)

Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by dogfairy, Aug 27, 2016.

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Now that the map has been changed, would you play it if it came to Egg Wars?

  1. Yes, I would love to!

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  2. Still No!

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    42.9%
  1. dogfairy

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    This is my new and improved version of the old "Towers" thread. Ill briefly explain what changes have been made:

    - The middle was completely overhauled. By that I mean I replaced the fountain and basic trees with a massive tower that has stain glass side and 2 sections that branch off of the main tower that hold generators. I also build 4 symmetrical trees surrounding the main tower
    - The bottom of both the team spawn locations and the middle was smoothed out to create a more natural feel.
    - Player islands were updated with more stair access to the gold generators and more iron generators
    - Some artwork now lives on the sides on the castle surrounding the central tower to give the map a more aesthetically pleasing look
    * In all, the renovations don't seem significant on paper, but i feel the map has been improved an extraordinary amount.
    *And I know that some aspects of this map do resemble that of "Kingdom" slightly but believe me when I say that this map is extremely different.

    And please, if you see anything that you think could be improved let me know. Criticism is the only way this map will continue to improve.
     

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    It looks good to me but I've never played the old map.. So?
     
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    I would like to see many new maps including this one! Also, next time I recommend you make the images full screen anyway so we don't have to take the trouble of opening them up! :)
     
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    There's really no depth in the tower. It just looks like a circle of stone blocks that was extruded upward with a tool, with some tacky glass and stuff framing it down. And then there's a random tower that's connected with like a little stick of stone, it's not necessary. The island towers still look blah, and still looks like a ragged Kingdom.
     
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    To much square.. Maybe a tip: World edit?
     
  7. KillerWolf12

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    i have never played on the old one so i dont really know but it looks fun :D
     
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    i will be completely honest with you
    The islands them selves don't seem similar to eggwars maps concept
    most maps have a long mountain thingy down and is made of mixed blocks not just stone (they used world edit)
    The Towers themselves don't look that appealing but middle is AMAZING
    you got the vines with leaves idea down but needs some improvement
    all you need to do
    *make a variety of blocks under the island other than stone (usually they use dirt, soul sand and course dirt)
    *mix grass with dirt course dirt cobble etc to look more professional
    *don't make it flat
    *Don't use one layer of grass then underneath it stone make it gradually go to dirt or even increase the grass

    That is all i see remember i am not a builder but some things must be changed
    also always expect criticism don't just give up if someone dislikes the build just improve it until it has been accepted :)
     
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    I like this map
     
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    The map looks great! I only think that it looks to empty because you see some vines, trees... and thats it. So maybe if you minimize the castle, you can add more decorations. But for now, I really like this map! ;)
     
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    While I do like it as a build, I don't like it as an eggwars map.

    1) This looks really similar to kingdom
    2) The towers themselves look kinda short and fat and bland.
    3) I think the tower in the middle has too much glass, it just doesn't feel right.
    4) The design is pretty basic, there isn't much room outside and the inside looks like it's just a big hollow space with some stairs.

    But there are some positives:

    1) I like the wines growing on the islands/towers.
    2) You have nice big buildings, scale the land up a bit to match and you'll be onto something.
    3) The custom trees in the middle look amazing!
     
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    I like growing wine too
     
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    What you have currently built is not really what I would like to see as an eggwars map on Cubecraft.
    You need to add more depth onto the map as currently it looks world edited. Also, the map would look a lot like the current map we have which is called "Kingdom" so I wouldn't really see the need for this map on Eggwars. I'm sorry, but it is a no support from me.
     
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    This thread will not be locked.
    This was posted only a few days ago. :)
     
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    Sorry for the mistake then. :(
     
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    So I wasn't wrong, hooraay :D
     
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    Not bad but to be honest, I don't see much detail, I'm not saying that I can make it better because I suck at building but There isn't much detail in my opinion.