Ideas for more detail?
View attachment 127967(I turned firetick to false)
Ok now I can see the whole map, I can help you a lot more I hope : P
So the things that look great are the bed designs, the TV and the jenga blocks on the floor. Good job making these!
My main issue with this map is you tend to make large bulky walls and slabs of the same type of block, which makes things look a bit bland. An example is the walls - you have used stone blocks which is great, but you should mix in another block to mix up the patterning a little and make it more interesting to look at.
Try using chiseled stone brick in places, or try adding a new colour to the walls like sandstone or maybe netherbrick (experiment to see which blocks look better than others). Just try not to keep it plain & boring like it is at the moment. The same goes for the wooden floor too. Use different shades of wood in there to make it more eye pleasing!
I also think the pillows need a bit of work - they just don't look natural. try using stone slabs combined with a light grey wool to form these. I know I'm the one who suggested it before, but I would take away the open flames in the middle xD it doesn't really make much sense, as there is no reason that suits the theme for it to be there. I think your best bet would be to just stick to glowstone, which I would put as a full border around the floor edges.
Also it's a little hard to tell, but is that slime you have used for the ladders? I don't know what thats doing there, it doesn't seem to belong. I would remove it and replace it with wood or something.
Finally to be more constructive, try adding a big painting to each wall. Or add a window with a window ledge. Or both if you have enough space! Should help give your map the WOW factor if you make it well enough :D
Sorry if any of this sounded too harsh, I'm just trying to help! Great job building all this so far, keep up the good work!
