Builds EggWars Map - [Mice]

[RaZerDB]

I like the map. Well done you two builders! :)

 

[Injunction]

In the middle or in ever cage? I was confused

The bottle for one of them and the outside of the cag but still in the middle

 

[SuperT]

Boom Updated

 

[MartijnMC]

Hey,
This eggwars map is pretty good, although I would change a few things:
- The islands are very flat, that can be good, but it's nice to have some hills or builds to improve the gameplay. Right now it looks a bit too flat and empty.
- There are almost no organic shapes, only a lot of squares. The mice look okay, but try to use some more realistic shapes instead of so many squares.
- Add some more colour (not only the colours of the teams)
Other than that it looks good :)

 

[SuperT]

Hey,
This eggwars map is pretty good, although I would change a few things:
- The islands are very flat, that can be good, but it's nice to have some hills or builds to improve the gameplay. Right now it looks a bit too flat and empty.
- There are almost no organic shapes, only a lot of squares. The mice look okay, but try to use some more realistic shapes instead of so many squares.
- Add some more colour (not only the colours of the teams)
Other than that it looks good :)

Thanks for looking at it. But the flatness is the problem we have no idea on how to solve. What could we make that isn't boxy/flat. Some stuff in cage/on shelves?

 

[MartijnMC]

You could change the flat bottom with something like sawdust, sand or straw, with some hills. Also shelves might be a good idea

 

[SuperT]

You could change the flat bottom with something like sawdust, sand or straw, with some hills. Also shelves might be a good idea

Flat bottom in mouse cage?

 

[MartijnMC]

Yes

 

[Madchicken2014]

The concept and the majority of the design is very good, however, the islands themselves are just a bit too generically blocky. Try to maybe increase the depth of the floor etc. to add detail

 

[Cubo ㅤ]

Not allot of detail,
The islands don't have the same distance from mid,
Mid is too small,
Too blocky,
Too flat,
Walls too simple,
Etc. etc.
It's a nice concept but the map is really amateurish. Not yet on Cube's level. Still needs allot of improvement.
I can see this map looking amazing but not now, not yet.

Perfect description.

 

[SuperT]

The concept and the majority of the design is very good, however, the islands themselves are just a bit too generically blocky. Try to maybe increase the depth of the floor etc. to add detail

the floor has multiple levels

 

[Madchicken2014]

the floor has multiple levels

The depth of the floors is only 1 thick and it just looks like you've bought the wrong parts from IKEA and the back and floor don't align properly. Really amateurish I have to say.

 

[SuperT]

The depth of the floors is only 1 thick and it just looks like you've bought the wrong parts from IKEA and the back and floor don't align properly. Really amateurish I have to say.

I know, the theme was difficult to make because mice cages are cubish. I don't even care about this map anymore really.

 

[FlamegameVideos]

The depth of the floors is only 1 thick and it just looks like you've bought the wrong parts from IKEA and the back and floor don't align properly. Really amateurish I have to say.

Hi sir the "back" is actually a wall, and the "floor" is a shelf attached to the wall

 

[MonsterStorm_]

Nice Map, i like it :D
good job