supersonicfan14`s Builder Application (Hide & Seek: Mansion)

Discussion in 'Minecraft Creations' started by McgamerBroFTW, Apr 14, 2014.

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Should I get [Builder] rank?

  1. YEA :D

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  2. PROBABLY :|

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  3. NO >:(

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  1. McgamerBroFTW

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    This took me HOURS! XD
    Here I`ve made a mansion with different rooms, outside swimming pool, shed and yea...

    I got a ton of screenshots:
     

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    Plot Id = 89;-51
     
  4. McgamerBroFTW

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    And that glass thingy is for seekers spawnpoint
     
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  6. SevereWarning

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    Hours ye say...
     
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  8. SevereWarning

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    This lacks huge amounts of detail, and the whole plot is flat.
     
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    I agree with Severe, it doesn't have any detail and it looks plan, and you did not use the whole plot.
    No from me, sorry McgamerBroFTW :/
    @Formelet would you like to give him some tips?
     
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    it needs lots more detail and more terraforming around the outsides.
     
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    much much more detail, and terraforming
     
  12. emiraati

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    Wait this is a hide and seek map?
     
  13. McgamerBroFTW

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    So, should I use up more of the plot?
     
  14. Formelet

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    Get inspired by other good plots.
     
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    It looks too much like a regular Minecraft house. Add some PIZZAZ to it. Make this mansion YOURS, not just like any other mansion.
     

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    Diamond
    Detail detail DETAIL :p
    Maybe some terraforming?
     
  17. McgamerBroFTW

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    D: I can`t see the pic
     
  18. Paco158

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    Make it unique :p.
     
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    for starters I think you could add a lot more detail the house and the surroundings look really plain, also some terraforming would look good
     
  20. Paco158

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    I'll send you screenshots of my not completed builder application.
    [​IMG] See how unique it is :)
     
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