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SkyWars Map Submission: Dungeons!

Discussion in 'Games' started by Galaxyfeather, Nov 14, 2014.

  1. Galaxyfeather

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    @simbajade and I were working on a map in Creative because we both wanted to build a map, so we decided to work together on one, and honestly, I think it came out a lot better than expected! I had a lot of fun building the map. Simba built the islands while I worked on the middle.
    Our plot ID is: 150;-166
    I'll post the Screenshots one at a time and put a description on each. ;3

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    The first island, built by Simba.
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    The dungeon of the first island.
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    The Second Island, built by Simba.
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    Dungeon of the second island.
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    Third island, built by Simba.
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    Dungeon for the Third island.
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    Now for the middle island! The Tower.
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    That's all the tower Screenshots. Let's take a look at a sky view of the whole plot. ;3
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    All images aside, this is what we've got. Like I said above, Simba built the islands, I built the middle.
    There are quite a few people who looked at it, actually. I'll tag them. ^.^/
    @Efcluke94 @PinkStr3ak @WolfWhisperer12 @sealgoesowowow
    Those are the only staff I saw on the plot. ;3 I hope you guys think well of it. Criticism is welcome, but only HELPFUL criticism.
    (Yes, the middle is supposed to be a crumbling tower. ;3)​
     
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    It seems too simple; I think you could do better than place random iron bars around each island.
     
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    Hmmm.. Well, don't forget the little wood spires, but I see what you mean. I'll see about adding more to the islands.
     
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    Hmmmmm.... Doesnt look much like a dungeon to me. It just doesnt have that "feel". But it still looks great! Maybe try again after retooling and reworking the theme to something that describes it better.
     
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    It was Simba's idea to do Theme. I merely went along with it. The center dungeon is based off a tower that is commonly seen in Hexxit. The dungeons that Simba made were based off your every day spawner dungeons.​
     
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    I meant to say Dungeon where I said Theme. oops​
     
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    I understand where you guys went with it, but to me it just does not make me a picture a dungeon. Try looking up some photos of dungeons and work from that, or try reworking the theme as I mentioned earlier.
     
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    Wow! In the screenshots, it looks good, but better in person!
     
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    Well, actually, they're supposed to be minecraft based, but I know what you mean. However, it is Simba who has to redo the islands, as they were built by him. Though I can only add to them.​
     
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    Well.. Making me do all the work huh!?! Lol jk
     
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    Well, yea, of course. Pshhh.....
    jk jk. Yea, you built the islands, you gotta renovate 'em, too. ;3​
     
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    Ok... I will tomorrow while it at ur Lockin and that way what I do will hopefully suprise you !
     
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    I love love love this, I think it has lots of potential. Do you mind if I come on creative and help you a bit w details? :)
     
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    Possibly. But you'll have to wait till tomorrow, as well as see if it is okay with Simba that you help. I may be the owner of plot, but I'm not the dictator. I don't mind if you help, but if Simba disagrees, then I cannot. But you're more than welcome to look at the plot. The ID is stated above the images.​
     
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    I love it but it is not at its best. The islands are kind of simple and with all the submissions they need something that can really 'Wow' them. They are kind of large and the space isn't well used for its size. The center could use way more detailing, for instance work on the wall of the tower because it looks like 4 walls with vines. Maybe add more blocks and try to incorporate more depth to it. Over all a decent start but could use a lot more.
     
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    The walls of the tower in the center are supposed to be old and crumbling. However, the islands are for Simba to do. As he has stated, he said he will add to them.​
     
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    Yes, though even if broken down it looks way too sipmle and I have made broken down structures that still have depth and block variation. It doesn't really look natural like a broken down tower should, it's as if it was just spammed with vines and left as that.
     
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    But is not spammed up with vines. The vines are used to make it look overgrown.
    And I was not intending for the build to be compared to other builds like it is lesser.
     
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    Ok, I guess I see your point. Though the only tips I can give is add more blocks,make it look more natural, and add depth. So I guess thats all I can reccommend and will now wish you the best of luck, good luck! :D
     
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    Thank you. I see what you mean, however I cannot work on it right now. But I will see to it. ​