Builds (skywar) not sure name

[ItsTheWobbit]

name: not sure sry
maker: me ItsTheWobbit
desciption; made for grampa & to i build first map :D

 

[ItsTheWobbit]

why say no :( it bad?

 

[Deleted member 492126]

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[ItsTheWobbit]

This looks like map Trees but way worse. Each tree looks different, there's even a random taiga tree, wat? 0 detail, a very random smiley face and the only build is a box made out of bricks

i try sry :confused1:

 

[AceGodz]

This looks like map Trees but way worse. Each tree looks different, there's even a random taiga tree, wat? 0 detail, a very random smiley face and the only building is a box made out of bricks

100% this

 

[Eli]

About the map, I’m a fan of all of your creations! And I’m sure we would very well be able to play skywars in this map. Problem is, it perhaps isn’t as detailed as it should be. You might wanna find some build inspiration to improve your map and make it look better, perhaps choose a more original theme and you can just update the thread later on. Good job though!

 

[remio]

It's so good, no builder has ever reached this level. Perhaps you could replace Luke when he resigns!

 

[Kloska]

I've deleted the off topic comments. Now, please stay on topic to the actual submission and leave constructive criticism to help out eachother instead of being rude. Thanks! :)

 

[AceGodz]

I've deleted the off topic comments. Now, please stay on topic to the actual submission and leave constructive criticism to help out eachother instead of being rude. Thanks! :)

ok I am sorry I didn't mean to come across as rude

 

[Eli]

I've deleted the off topic comments. Now, please stay on topic to the actual submission and leave constructive criticism to help out eachother instead of being rude. Thanks! :)

The second part of my comment was entirely on topic. You could’ve deleted the first part :/

 

[Chupador]

I've deleted the off topic comments. Now, please stay on topic to the actual submission and leave constructive criticism to help out eachother instead of being rude. Thanks! :)

You deleted some that were on topic, the map isn't good so I do not know why people are lying to them..

 

[Kloska]

You deleted some that were on topic, the map isn't good so I do not know why people are lying to them..

The second part of my comment was entirely on topic. You could’ve deleted the first part :/

Sorry, fixed it.

 

[AceGodz]

there isn't much room on the starting islands and it looks like the trees get in the way.
the 2nd ring of islands look alright but maybe some custom trees would be better and the face looks out of place.
maybe a better house in the middle.
it doesn't look like there is much room to fight overall and there isn't really any detail so that is the main things I would change.
maybe try and give it a overall theme that is unique and not on any other maps

 

[CoolGamer003]

yes

 

[CraftCreatures]

The islands where the players spawn are too small in my opinion and it needs more decoration. But since it is your first map, you did a good job. But keep improving the map. :)

 

[Starry]

This map is the best i’ve ever seen. I love it

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

It's so good, no builder has ever reached this level. Perhaps you could replace Luke when he resigns!

Rude much?

This map is the best i’ve ever seen. I love it

Jesus Christ! What is up with you guys... You have never attacked worse builds before, why now?

You deleted some that were on topic, the map isn't good so I do not know why people are lying to them..

Truth ≠ Being rude

The islands where the players spawn are too small in my opinion and it needs more decoration. But since it is your first map, you did a good job. But keep improving the map. :)

Basically what I was going to say. @ItsTheWobbit if you need help with building hit me up!

 

[FireExcalibur10]

That is how I started doing void maps, at the beginning were just like ass islands without cool layouts and weird stuff but eventually with patience, hard work and dedication it all end up good. I advise you to look at planetminecraft.com for skywars maps as models for creating your own. Try to think as if you were inside the map and playing it. Try cool palettes with cool layouts and a hooky gameplay :)

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

That is how I started doing void maps, at the end were just like ass islands without cool layouts and weird stuff but eventually with patience, hard work and dedication it all end up good. I advise you to look at planetminecraft.com for skywars maps as models for creating your own. Try to think as if you were inside the map and playing it. Try cool palettes with cool layouts and a hooky gameplay :)

But don’t steal maps. ;)

 

[remio]

Rude much?



Jesus Christ! What is up with you guys... You have never attacked worse builds before, why now?



Truth ≠ Being rude



Basically what I was going to say. @ItsTheWobbit if you need help with building hit me up!

https://m.imgur.com/gallery/9nohQh4
(Stop saying the word rude btw lol)