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SkyCastle 4 teams of 5

Discussion in 'Minecraft Creations' started by ShadowUniverse, Nov 7, 2016.

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Do you like it?

  1. Yes

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  2. No needs more detail

    9 vote(s)
    81.8%
  1. ShadowUniverse

    ShadowUniverse Member

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    This is a map im making for eggwars its a work in progress how do you like it give me feedback and please give me opinions and ways to make it better i will greatly appreciate it . :) i am not to good at building but this took me 1 hour to do but if you guys like it and give me ways to make it better i will make the rest of it with your suggestions THANKS! HOPE YOU LIKE IT!
     

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    Is the screenshot supposed to be in the thread or is it coming? I don't see any links or pictures :)
     
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    sorry its there now lol
     
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    In my opinion it needs more detail. The building is a little bit too blocky or flat and decorations around the island would make the map more awesome. I also would do something with the inside because beside the generators I don't see anything at all, so interior is also nice. Interior, outside decorations and improving the building are the 3 main things I would focus on now. But don't stop building, this map is gonna be awesome when it's finished, just start to focus on those three things ;)
    Good luck! :D
     
  5. ShadowUniverse

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    thanks :D i think its a good idea i will work inside now
     
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    Good luck mate! :D
     
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    Much needed
     
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    Yeah this map is really good 100%
    Kup Teraz quality
    You should submit the map
    and then apply for builder
    100% YOU'LL GET ACCEPTED YOUR MAPS IS SOOO GOOOOD.

    Your map doesn't just need details. It's just... broken. It needs a new foundation. You can add all detail you want but it's always gonna be a square with an entrance and a pyramid on top .__.
     
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    you dont have to be sarcastic -_-
     
  10. ShadowUniverse

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    also its not a square island i did'nt show you all the sides but whatever XD
     
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    Im sorry dude, but this map would be unplayable. Don't take personal offense by this, but this map is really bad. The detail is nonexistent, there is no gap between middle and base, and the bases themselves are horrible. This probably only took you 15 minutes to build. Making a quality egg wars map takes time, as in a few days. If you try again, good luck to you, but you need to spend much longer if you want a hope of being accepted.
     
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    no offense taking but i wasnt gonna submit it im doing this for feedback to do better TO make a better one
     
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    rip my headset input :(
    -.- u r rude
    But you are Right too. It need alot More detail and depht....
     
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    Sorry to tell you dude, but there's no way of sounding nice when giving criticism.
    I'd just suggest not to get personally harassed by a comment
     
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    Need to put a lot more detail into it, also when making the walls just dont do 1 block, use a lot of different ones and yeah
     
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    i worked more on it inside and outside i havent send any screenshtos yet though
     
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    it looks really cool but it will be better if you give little more details :)