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Pirates V2 Updated and Upgraded

Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by JaMo33, Jul 13, 2016.

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Do you want this map

Poll closed Jul 27, 2016.
  1. Yes

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  1. JaMo33

    JaMo33 Member

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    Hey everyone.

    This map that i have made is themed around pirates! I tried to make the whole map have a contrast betwen freedom and hostility and I did this by using a mix of sand and grass to represent fredom and stone walls and iron bars to reresent hostility. I designed this map to be 3 players per team as my friends and I feel there is a shortage of three player maps (there are three of us). BUT after i finished the build I thought it was a bit small for 3 players and i made it into a 2 player map.

    Per base:
    1 Iron generator lvl 2
    1 Gold generator lvl1
    1 Diamond generator lvl 0

    Outer middle:
    1 Gold generator lvl 3 ( I wanted to make it so it was a risk to get diamonds "hence" why there isnt a diamond generator in outer middle)

    Very middle
    1 Iron generator lvl 3

    2 Gold generators: 1 lvl 2
    1 lvl 3
    2 Diamond generators 1 lvl 1
    1 lvl 2

    thanks for your time.

    Have a nice day - J@Mo

    @Efcluke94
    @Alex_de_Grote
    @HuracanFTW
    @Undead
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  2. Buuuddy

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    This looks pretty nice! :)
     
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  3. JaMo33

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    Thankyou very much
     
  4. Mackicleo2002

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    Looks really good.
     
  5. Anmazing

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    I don't like the block palette, it just seems messy and unprofessional. You should also improve the flag and terraforming under some islands.
     
  6. JaMo33

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    ok it would help if i knew what block patette was but thanks for the feedback
     
  7. Anmazing

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    Block palette is basically a combination of blocks that you are using for your map. Here is an example of a good block palette; it is for a different theme, but I hope you'll understand the concept of it.
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  8. JaMo33

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    thx
    thanks again but i just used blocks that i thought went bes with the theme so that is why the combination that i used isnt the most slick but infact quite the opposite to represent roughness!
     
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    I don't have the 'WOW' feeling. I've the feeling that it's incomplete but idk what's missing :c
     
  10. Alex waatling

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    looks good
     
  11. Alex waatling

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    Block palette is fine i do not know what you are on about
     
  12. Anmazing

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    That is just my opinion, if you think sandstone, cobblestone, red sand, jungle wood and stone bricks make a good block palette, that's fine by me.
     
  13. JaMo33

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    I need ideas tho i have put a lot of thought into this map and I would love t make it better but i dont know how atm
     
  14. Alex waatling

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    kk i agree with you
     
  15. HuracanFTW

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    In my opinion there's still a lot of work to do. The block palette doesn't really look well and the overal details aren't that great either.
    The map doesn't really look like it's pirate themed, I don't see any boats or anything similar to that.

    I can't really give tips to improve it, just look at the maps that made it into the network and try to increase the quality of your map by creating a better block palette and adding better details to it. Maybe you could add some cool elements like a pirate boat, let your fantasy go and try to create something cool!

    Hopefully we see a new version of your current map soon!

    Greetings,
    Huracan.
     
  16. TheJeroen

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    lol he made a V3 already :p https://www.cubecraft.net/threads/new-and-final-pirates-v3.129075/
     
  17. JaMo33

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    hey sorry man i made a V3
     
  18. HuracanFTW

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