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Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by PogoScot, Oct 9, 2016.

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  1. PogoScot

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    Not bad, you should work on block variety, shapes, and island design. A plain wood plank all way long isn't that much :v

    For every time he says I'm not the best builder eat 5 spoons of Nutella
     
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    It will be cooler if you made 3D fruit as island because now it is just a plank with pixelart fruit on it (but it looks nice)
     
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    I really like the idea behind the whole build!
    Maybe someone else can help you with it since I personally think the theme is really nice :)

    Oh yeah I thought it was a cherry but then you said it was a tomato ;-;
     
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    Yeah indeed like you say the tomato looks like a cherry but like i said before it looks nice ;)
     
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    I like the theme as Egg Wars has no fruit themed maps. Good start for building. Keep building and you will get a lot better! Try getting depth insperation from other Egg Wars maps.
     
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    Is there anyone that can help me build it in more depth?
     
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    I'm not sure if they have time but @yoyamin and @StopWalking are good builders :)
     
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    Nice work ! Look beautiful :)
     
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    yes more 3D and more datails
     
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    Make the island itself more detailed, instead of just a flat platform with fruit on it.
    Good map for the rest.
     
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    but im a better banana builder ;)
     
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    I really like your concept, but it all just feels a little... flat?

    I would say this is a good start, but adding a little more depth would improve it a lot.
     
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    I know it is flat, just I am not that good of a builder. I need someone to help me. Create a conversation with me if you want to help me! Pls.
     
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    You should defenitely add a pineapple (and a pen)

    Anyways, it's a good start, but try to give it a more natural and round shape, good luck!
     
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    Cool theme!
     
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    I think the idea is great, but as you said: it has to be improved.
     
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    The build is fascinating! Keep up the great work. The detail of the fruit is great!
     
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