Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by PogoScot, Oct 9, 2016.
Not bad, you should work on block variety, shapes, and island design. A plain wood plank all way long isn't that much :v
For every time he says I'm not the best builder eat 5 spoons of Nutella
It will be cooler if you made 3D fruit as island because now it is just a plank with pixelart fruit on it (but it looks nice)
I really like the idea behind the whole build!
Maybe someone else can help you with it since I personally think the theme is really nice
Oh yeah I thought it was a cherry but then you said it was a tomato ;-;
Yeah indeed like you say the tomato looks like a cherry but like i said before it looks nice
I like the theme as Egg Wars has no fruit themed maps. Good start for building. Keep building and you will get a lot better! Try getting depth insperation from other Egg Wars maps.
Is there anyone that can help me build it in more depth?
I'm not sure if they have time but @yoyamin and @StopWalking are good builders
Nice work ! Look beautiful
So is @Bloxen
yes more 3D and more datails
Make the island itself more detailed, instead of just a flat platform with fruit on it.
Good map for the rest.
but im a better banana builder
I really like your concept, but it all just feels a little... flat?
I would say this is a good start, but adding a little more depth would improve it a lot.
I know it is flat, just I am not that good of a builder. I need someone to help me. Create a conversation with me if you want to help me! Pls.
You should defenitely add a pineapple (and a pen)
Anyways, it's a good start, but try to give it a more natural and round shape, good luck!
I think the idea is great, but as you said: it has to be improved.
The build is fascinating! Keep up the great work. The detail of the fruit is great!
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