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Egg Wars Map - Mushrooms

Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by dogfairy, Oct 7, 2016.

  1. dogfairy

    dogfairy Member

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    This is a map I created for the gamemode "Eggwars" that consists of 4 spawn isands, each for 4 players, and the center. I drew inspiration from actual mushroom configurations and designs. The gnome in the center as well as the gardening spade I felt were good additions to what would have been a rather boring Middle without them.

    Each Island contains:
    4 Iron Generators
    2 Gold Generators
    2 Diamond Generators
    It functions in a series of platforms (Mushrooms increasing in Height) but are interconnected through stairs.

    The Middle contains:
    4 Gold Generators
    3 Diamond Generators
    Everything plays out basically within one level as their are no stairs or multilevel platforms. However, the diamond generators are at the tops of the mushrooms, but there are led up to through a staircase.
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    This is a great start! However, it needs improvement. First off, don't have two diamond generators at a home base. In fact, this looks like a good map to have zero diamond generators at a base. Also, I would add one level four iron generator at middle, many people prefer maps with that. Also, you might want to use other blocks besides dirt.
     
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    Nice start needs a bit more detail though other then that it looks great
     
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    Nice idea of the map, but some tips I wan't to give you:
    • 1 Diamond generator on the spawn island is enough. There is no map with 2 generators on it and it would be too Op
    • The map is too big in my opinion, if I first took a look at the fifth picture, I thought that island was mid. So smaller islands would make the map better and cleaner
    • I would keep the egg on the roof, a little bit like "tea party", but like I've said above, making the island and/or mushrooms smaller would maybe give the egg a better postition.
    • I won't make the space between mid and the other islands & between all the islands so big. Maybe something like 50 blocks or something
    • The inside could/outside could use more detials, like decorations, mini gnomes etc..
    • There is a big open space near the gnome in the middle, maybe fill that in with some decorations (I won't recommend mushrooms because you already have plenty of them on the map :p)

    This is all I have to say about it, really nice work but it needs more work, but you've done some really good progress. Good luck! ;)
     
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    I like the idea! But, needs some improvements, I agree with every improvement mentioned above except this one
    I would give the spawn's a little bit more detail because now, everything is very flat.
    Try to add some layers to the ground and use different sorts of blocks :)

    Great map!
     
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    I really like the gnome, but i think the mushroom needs to be improved: they look a little bit 'simple'.
    I think you could inprove the flags and the landsacpe/ floating island too.
     
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    The gnome is so cute, but you need a bit more detail and I think the map will be accepted
     
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    I feel like you should make player made mushroom trees?
     
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    Having the mushrooms slant would make it look a whole lot better. Great map though :D
     
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    I would like this map to be added on Eggwars Good job <3
     
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    needs more detail and plz change the egg location
     
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    Responses like these don't help a builder improve a map. Also, could you say WHY you don't like the egg location rather than just saying "plz change it"
     
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    nice start it needs a bit of diversity for instance more moundtains and a bit less 2d looking
     
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    yes it looks great just more details
     
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    nice start but...
    1. the ground is to plane make it more interesting.
    2. there is a little ''river'' make it bigger and deeper.
    3. the bottom of the mushroom from the mid is to square
    :)
     
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    this map looks good
     
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    I like it but it need work if you want help im willing to helo out email me for details at ultra7ex.com@gmail.com