Implemented [Duels] Pirates [ACCEPTED]

[_The13thDoctor_]

Hey, everyone! It cost me an arm and a leg but I finally finished this map. I'm not worried about school because I'm getting high SEAS. Anyways here it is, my first submission!

- Map name: Pirates
- Creator(s) of the map: @_The13thDoctor_
- Description of map: The Red and Blue ship captains clash in a duel for the special treasure under the buried treasure. The map is surrounded by giant rocks accompanied by 2 massive ships and a small but crab filled island with your occasional bird. Most of the fighting will take place on the sea with a chance to fight on the decks, to the island, to the rocks above.

https://imgur.com/a/GMMXqVT

Feedback is very much appreciated! Good or bad, I'd like to hear it! Please, however, vote based on how much you like the map gameplay and style-wise, keep in mind this is going to be a map for everyone so don't vote if you want to be a troll or you don't like me.

Special Thanks:
@Elivat
@Nutuu for giving me the ship to modify and rebuild.
@SanCookie for his advice and criticism.
@Yoya for showing me a lot of world edit techniques and helping me learn how do make certain things

What do pirates like to do at school? Arrrrrrrrrt!

 

[Reapz]

Obvious yes, I really like it

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

Obvious yes, I really like it

Thanks! <3

 

[Simply]

Yes but the only thing I would change is the height of the island. Lower it down to 2 blocks perhaps cause at its current state, people can easily get the highground and keep knocking the enemy back.

 

[Nutuu]

yees

 

[CraftCreatures]

I really like this map! :)

 

[srpigglet]

Wow! Would like to see this on cubecraft, nice job!

 

[Priley]

@FireExcalibur10 I've seen you voting against a handful of maps but you rarely ever explain yourself. Mind giving Doc and Eli some tips? :)

Personally, I hate the border wall (rocks) because they look really messy: both colour-wise speaking as shape-wise. It looks like //brush sphere without much of smoothening to them. There are way too many different blocks as well. I would have used stone, andesite and perhaps some gravel and buttons to add more detail

I'm not the best if it comes to building ships and such, but I'm sure this isn't exactly right. It stretches out way too far and way too high

I definitely think the ships should be moved downwards by a block to prevent players from staying on their ship and knocking back their opponent all the time

This palm leaf looks odd and unnatural

These heads will undoubtedly get in the way of the battle and should be removed

I like the idea and overall execution, it's just the small details that could've been done better - imo
The feedback I gave is all from my own perspective and my own opinion! :)
Hope it can help!

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

Yes but the only thing I would change is the height of the island. Lower it down to 2 blocks perhaps cause at its current state, people can easily get the highground and keep knocking the enemy back.

It really not that big of a difference because both players can reach there at the same time it’s just who hits first. I have seen maps with the high ground but even worse. I could change it but that would make the island weird.

@FireExcalibur10 I've seen you voting against a handful of maps but you rarely ever explain yourself. Mind giving Doc and Eli some tips? :)

Yes.

Personally, I hate the border wall (rocks) because they look really messy: both colour-wise speaking as shape-wise. It looks like //brush sphere without much of smoothening to them. There are way too many different blocks as well. I would have used stone, andesite and perhaps some gravel and buttons to add more detail

I'm not sure I showed this but I did smooth it out more on the inside, this is an outside shot and tbh that won't matter so much because the only people wandering there will most likely die soon. I will add buttons, but they're supposed to be messy. Since when should rocks be clean? There rocks, random and could be anything.

I'm not the best if it comes to building ships and such, but I'm sure this isn't exactly right. It stretches out way too far and way too high

It's the style, I could fix it but then the rest of the ship would look a bit weird.

I definitely think the ships should be moved downwards by a block to prevent players from staying on their ship and knocking back their opponent all the time

Would you like me to add a natural or unnatural entrance to combat this? Downwards will make it super weird like it's sinking.

This palm leaf looks odd and unnatural

I will fix that.

These heads will undoubtedly get in the way of the battle and should be removed

It's a small detail that's purposely placed in an area where people won't normally be. I can move them but Snap, Crackle, and Pop are here to stay.



I like the idea and overall execution, it's just the small details that could've been done better - imo
The feedback I gave is all from my own perspective and my own opinion! :)
Hope it can help!

Thanks for the feedback!

Wow! Would like to see this on cubecraft, nice job!

Thanks! <3

I really like this map! :)

Thanks! <3

yees

Thanks! <3

Update Coming Soon!

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

Update!

https://imgur.com/a/1tp8Nyr

-Added ladder behind the boat
-Increase cannon size and moved ladders so it's easier to get onto the ship.
-Fixed Tree
-You can now get onto the rocks easily and get onto the ship by going around.

 

[Dutudy]

Update!

https://imgur.com/a/1tp8Nyr

-Added ladder behind the boat
-Increase cannon size and moved ladders so it's easier to get onto the ship.
-Fixed Tree
-You can now get onto the rocks easily and get onto the ship by going around.

Add some coconuts under the palm tree instead!

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

Add some coconuts under the palm tree instead!

Added some!

@Slimeyz and @FireExcalibur10 mind telling me why you voted no?

@Riley will you be changing your vote?

 

[Haighers112]

It's a very well built map and looks like something that would already be on CubeCraft, unsure as to why people have voted a no without putting a reason.. It would be the decent thing to put some reasons why you voted no and what the builders can do to make it better in your eyes.

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

It's a very well built map and looks like something that would already be on CubeCraft, unsure as to why people have voted a no without putting a reason.. It would be the decent thing to put some reasons why you voted no and what the builders can do to make it better in your eyes.

One of the no reasons why people is a builder. :eyes:

 

[Haighers112]

One of the no reasons why people is a builder. :eyes:

If they are a builder I would think they would put some tips on what they think would be an improvement instead of a no vote and moving on, to me it feels disrespectful and I didn't even make the map..

 

[FireExcalibur10]

Oh ye sorry I forgot to reply xd. Basicly is what Riley showed at the photos. Try removing that red heads and add a light brown ones like sandstone. As for the palette of the edges, make it with a darker grey tone.

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

Oh ye sorry I forgot to reply xd. Basicly is what Riley showed at the photos. Try removing that red heads and add a light brown ones like sandstone. As for the palette of the edges, make it with a darker grey tone.

Those read heads are crabs. For the rocks I’m currently working on that. What blocks do you suggest?

 

[FireExcalibur10]

Those read heads are crabs. For the rocks I’m currently working on that. What blocks do you suggest?

Try dark grey terracota and clay mixed with the stone one.

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

Try dark grey terracota and clay mixed with the stone one.

Ok! I’ll have that done in a moment.

 

[Nutuu]

@FireExcalibur10 I've seen you voting against a handful of maps but you rarely ever explain yourself. Mind giving Doc and Eli some tips? :)

Personally, I hate the border wall (rocks) because they look really messy: both colour-wise speaking as shape-wise. It looks like //brush sphere without much of smoothening to them. There are way too many different blocks as well. I would have used stone, andesite and perhaps some gravel and buttons to add more detail

I'm not the best if it comes to building ships and such, but I'm sure this isn't exactly right. It stretches out way too far and way too high

I definitely think the ships should be moved downwards by a block to prevent players from staying on their ship and knocking back their opponent all the time

This palm leaf looks odd and unnatural

These heads will undoubtedly get in the way of the battle and should be removed

I like the idea and overall execution, it's just the small details that could've been done better - imo
The feedback I gave is all from my own perspective and my own opinion! :)
Hope it can help!

The ship is actually built over 1.5 years ago xD