Builds Crystalline: Eggwars Map Submission

[TheCraftBro]

So! I have finished my first map, and here it is. I call it "Crystalline". In this build, I was going for a clean, crisp feeling, as some maps can be kind of cluttered. I chose to have my details in patterns, and NOT in variety of blocks. I hope you enjoy, and I'd appreciate feedback!

Mode: Solo
Players: 8
Islands have: a lvl 2 Iron gen, a Lvl 1 Gold gen, and a broken Diamond gen.
Video:

NOTE: The gold gens at the bottom of mid are Lvl 1!

Above View: (Before Gens/Eggs):

Side view:

From Below:

Island Closeup:

Link to album: (For proof of creation) http://imgur.com/a/aJyqi
Sorry, I forgot to take a lot of screenshots at the start, but you can see the work around the edges of some images, And there are plenty of later screenshots.

Just for the record: Yes, this map is 100% my creation, and I did NOT use anyone else's ideas/work.

Thanks for your time, and I hope you enjoy!
- TheCraftBro

Builder Tags: @Efcluke94 @MaxvD @Alex_de_Grote @HuracanFTW @Undead @Alex_de_Grote

 

[Alex_de_Grote]

It is a cool setup to be honest but i think it should be improved so with more details and more layers

 

[JetTG]

I think the name "Fractals" would better suit this. Also, like alex said, it could definitely do with more layers underneath it and above it. The islands just seem flat without other layers supporting them.

 

[TheCraftBro]

Alright, I'll look into some depth for the islands. Thanks for your advice! [hopefully I will have the changes tomorrow]

 

[ElWitherMx12]

I dont like it, and its my opinion

 

[King_FTW]

i don't really get the theme in this map, maybe work with some floating islands with some vegitation on it?

 

[Megaaa]

i don't really get the theme in this map, maybe work with some floating islands with some vegitation on it?

I think it is a kind of DNA.

I like the concept of your map, but as Alex said, the islands need more detail. Like the middle is just one big white quartz square. If you can make it, I don't broken, a broken DNA? That would be a lot better. ;)

 

[MrPolymath]

most people i think will not like this but i honestly very much like the idea Alex is right though it needs something more to make it look and feel more like a playable map.

 

[ItzSandroid]

nice map but the islands are to flat make some walls and it would be a lot better :D

 

[Qin Shihuangdi]

The islands are too flat. Maybe make a house or something in the middle, to enhance the depth of this map, because it seems plain at the moment.

 

[Ralius_NL]

So! I have finished my first map, and here it is. I call it "Crystalline". In this build, I was going for a clean, crisp feeling, as some maps can be kind of cluttered. I chose to have my details in patterns, and NOT in variety of blocks. I hope you enjoy, and I'd appreciate feedback!

Mode: Solo
Players: 8
Islands have: a lvl 2 Iron gen, a Lvl 1 Gold gen, and a broken Diamond gen.
Video:

NOTE: The gold gens at the bottom of mid are Lvl 1!

Above View: (Before Gens/Eggs):

Side view:

From Below:

Island Closeup:

Link to album: (For proof of creation) http://imgur.com/a/aJyqi
Sorry, I forgot to take a lot of screenshots at the start, but you can see the work around the edges of some images, And there are plenty of later screenshots.

Just for the record: Yes, this map is 100% my creation, and I did NOT use anyone else's ideas/work.

Thanks for your time, and I hope you enjoy!
- TheCraftBro

Builder Tags: @Efcluke94 @MaxvD @Alex_de_Grote @HuracanFTW @Undead @Alex_de_Grote

Its too cuby, and too hard to mobe around. 5/10 currently