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Builds Bedwars map

Would you like to play this map?

  • Yes

    Votes: 17 85.0%
  • No

    Votes: 3 15.0%

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Diav

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So I built this map as a commission for a server where I am builder. As you can see I wanted it to have a very simple but effective design: I used mostly clay and tried to give it like a cartoonish vibe. I didn't want to add too many details cause I've been playing eggwars for so long and I know that very detailed maps could be annoying for the gameplay so I chose to make a flat terraforming that is very good for the pvp.
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I like how it turned out and I can't wait to know what you think about it (Obviously the pieces of grass that you can see in the background will be removed).
 

Saammm

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It is not a bad map, for me it is just to much clay (i get that you want a cartoonish style). For me it is simply just not what i like as person, other people might like it because everyone has their own taste. The different colors on each island are well done, maybe you should try to make it more seasonal if you get what i mean.. the rest is fine and good luck with your map! :p
 

StopWalking

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Basics, layout and block choices look great, but please get some custom trees in there, those trees look like the normal spruce trees, but with clay instead of leaves. So try and make them look a little bit more custom.
 

Diav

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It is not a bad map, for me it is just to much clay (i get that you want a cartoonish style). For me it is simply just not what i like as person, other people might like it because everyone has their own taste. The different colors on each island are well done, maybe you should try to make it more seasonal if you get what i mean.. the rest is fine and good luck with your map! :p
Thank you for your feedback c:
Basics, layout and block choices look great, but please get some custom trees in there, those trees look like the normal spruce trees, but with clay instead of leaves. So try and make them look a little bit more custom.
There aren't many other ways to make a sprouce tree using only clay and giving it a cartoonish vibe, if you tell me to make more customs like using other blocks you didnt get what I wanted by the map. Thank you tho.
 

Nosem

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Nice dude. Thank you for making that proposal. That would make us out a lot if all playerswould do that. Thanks again You have shown the good example.

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Diav

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Nice dude. Thank you for making that proposal. That would make us out a lot if all playerswould do that. Thanks again You have shown the good example.

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Nice dude. Thank you for making that proposal. That would make us out a lot if all playerswould do that. Thanks again You have shown the good example.

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I'm sad that this isn't for Egg Wars, cause if so that would be sweeeeeet.
Thank you c:
Maps looks nice and clean, could use a bit more detail though.

(Eggwars)
I wanted to give it a very simple design with not many details as you can see
 
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Nutuu

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Looks like a map to me yeah.
BUT
-I think it looks weird that there are visible "stripes" on every island.
-The sub-mid islands are very small. You would most likely get hit off it with one hit.
-The starting islands have the square shape.
-The islands have the 1 block overhang + they bottom of them is boxy and small. (I play eggwars a lot and I like to block clutch, in this map it's impossible)
-The flags look weird, they have a thick pole and a very small flag (Not that my flags would look better either)
-The trees, especially the trees with the ball on top, /br s 159:x 2 on top of a 1 block thick trunk, added a few stripes on the leaves.
-Playing in the middle would be painful as it's a very little area
Sorry if I'm a bit critical with this, I know you probably are better than me in some things as you're a member on builders refuge and I'm not.

Otherwise, it looks nice especially the render, I can't do those :D
 
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Diav

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That would be a really cool map! +1
Thank you
Looks like a map to me yeah.
BUT
-I think it looks weird that there are visible "stripes" on every island.
-The sub-mid islands are very small. You would most likely get hit off it with one hit.
-The starting islands have the square shape.
-The islands have the 1 block overhang + they bottom of them is boxy and small. (I play eggwars a lot and I like to block clutch, in this map it's impossible)
-The flags look weird, they have a thick pole and a very small flag (Not that my flags would look better either)
-The trees, especially the trees with the ball on top, /br s 159:x 2 on top of a 1 block thick trunk, added a few stripes on the leaves.
-Playing in the middle would be painful as it's a very little area
Sorry if I'm a bit critical with this, I know you probably are better than me in some things as you're a member on builders refuge and I'm not.

Otherwise, it looks nice especially the render, I can't do those :D
Uhm I don't agree with some things but I appreciate your feedback :p
 
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