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EdtrizzleMinecrizzle

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You're, uh, missing teeth there, buddy.

Oh, and I don't think the shirt logo should be that small. Considering the fact that the camera only shows part of your upper body, the tetris block should be WAY bigger.

But everything else looks nice!
 

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You're, uh, missing teeth there, buddy.

Oh, and I don't think the shirt logo should be that small. Considering the fact that the camera only shows part of your upper body, the tetris block should be WAY bigger.

But everything else looks nice!
Ya but it his first time :[
 

EdtrizzleMinecrizzle

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First one:

Pretty good. The textures on the hair are amazing, but unless the hair has bangs, which in this case, it doesn't, it shouldn't overlap with the eyebrows (Also, I think the shine on both eyes are supposed to face the same direction). You're also missing some sideburns on the right side of the face, and unless the small tetris block is intentional, it should be bigger if you want it to cover the whole shirt. Oh, and the body is strangely round. I don't know if that's intentional or not. Still, he looks cool.



Second one:


The missing teeth make the smile look weird, and the head is a bit on the...rectangular side. It looks like his right eyebrow is missing, and even though the hair is covering it, there should still be part of the eyebrow that you can see. The weird thingiemabbobers on the top of the head don't look all that natural. Neither does the neckwarmer. Try using reference images to see how clothing like that would normally look.

Keep trying! Don't be afraid to look at tutorials or use reference images! Believe in the inner teamwork of waffles and pancakes, and stay gold, Ponyboy!
 
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