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  1. Hallucinated

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    Creative Writing Event

    The winners of this writing event are:
    1st: @Guardi4n
    2nd: @Exciting_pancake
    3rd: @SimbaSource_

    Winning Ranks
    1st Place: Gold Rank / Rank Up
    2nd Place: Lapiz Rank / Give Away Rank
    3rd Place: Iron Rank / Give Away Rank

    Event ends on March 15th
    Any emails sent past March 15th will be unread and deleted.

    Good luck and open your minds everybody!
    The Sacred Life
    A minecraft story by Guardi4n

    Long ago , the world was a nice place. Animals and players lived together in peace , there where no monsters in that world or even gigantic dragons. One time in that perfect world , a player joined. His nickname was ' Wai ' and he held in his body the sacred sphere of life , that protected the world from evil. Wai didn't care for the world , all he wanted was his own protection and evil for the other players and animals. Only Wai had the sphere of life , deep in his body , the other players just lived there in the minecraft world but they didn't have any sphere of life , they didn't have any secret powers like Wai had.

    One time , while Wai slept , he heard a voice. ' Wai ... I am the god of evil in the world... I have been in a prison for 10000 years now ... Save me and together we will bring to the world what it deserves! ' Wai felt a dark energy in his body and his eyes started to glow dark. ' How should I save you great god of evil? ' he asked.
    ' Place the black stones in a portal shape and burn it ' Wai knew that the black stones were only breakable with the best of the Pickaxes and that they were formed when lava touched water. ' I will do it! '

    The blacksmith of the village where Wai lived didn't have the precious black stones neither did it have the diamond ores to break it. Wai bought an iron pickaxe and went mining until he found the diamond ores. The mining trip took him 3 days. He found lots of iron and some gold , but he didn't find any diamond ores. ' Wai ... use the sacred magic that I gave to you ... Open your eyes... ' Wai's eyes started to glow black again and he saw the diamond ores and all the other stones and ores were invisible . Wai mined the diamond ores and mixed water with lava. He broke the black stones with his new diamond pickaxe , placed them in a portal shape and burned it with fire. The portal started to glow and a new dimension was born called ' The Nether ' . This was were the god of evil Akon was being imprisoned. Wai entered the portal , the nether was a gigantic world with big lava oceans.
    ' Finally ... you have come to me! You opened the portal and now I'm free!' Great Fire came out of Akon's mouth and black wings started to grow out of his back. Wai started to fly and his spiritual body entered Akons body. Now Wai and Akon were one. ' The minecraft overworld will have what it deserves ' he said...

    The beast passed through the portal and now he was in the overworld. ' Finally' The great beast started to destroy the world by burning it with fire. The villages were all destroyed and a new era started. The beast was the god of this world where he once ruled. But the divine time of the beast was not long. The gods that once imprisioned Akon were back... ' Akon , your time here will come to an end again! Like we did 10000 years ago , but now your prison will be a place where no human will ever go! ' they said. The great beast was strong but the divine gods had a great power too! They imprisioned the beast under the world and placed bedrock there so that no human could ever make it to Akon's new prison , but at one cost.
    Monsters started to spawn , some with special abilities. The new humans of that world needed to protect themselfs from those creatures. They needed to do everything alone without the help of any gods. A new era was born that day.

    As i stumbled into a world of enjoyment, there were cakes and candy all around me. I looked down, i was standing in a pole, i knew what a had to do and in deep thoughts i heard a faint bang go off behind me. This was it.

    As i pelted it to the middle as fast as i could, i saw many others around me losing their step and falling over, i knew i couldn't make an error, i had only 20 seconds to get out of there.

    I grabbed as much as i could and fled away hoping no one would follow, i wiped my forehead as a sign of relief.

    I put my gear on and went looking for others, i knew i had to protect myself and kill any others who would approach me, soon, after battling hard, i heard faded echos of what sounded like gun shots.

    It felt like hours, probably minutes, most likely seconds until i was finally reunited with the last of my enemys, i glanced around, still what seemed to be in a place of enjoyment, but i knew it wasn't.

    A loud bang went off and he came charging at me, in the heat of the moment, i jumped off my pole and ran, i ran towards the other person who was also running away, i managed to reach with him and in one swing of my sword, he was gone.

    I turned around, i was faced with the last one. I could do this, this would be it! I swong my sword and he swong his, i was hurt but i managed to get back up and fight back. I did it, I won the game!

    References: CCG survival games candy map, steve's first time play on SG and his thoughts.

    (Comments: i didn't want to make it strictly "minecraft" related (E.G saying the word minecraft in it) as i figued thats what everyone would be doing, i referenced it and left it out to interpretation)

    ~Exciting_pancake

    It was my two friends, Ava Michael and I. We were playing skywars on CubeCraft games, the best skywars server. As soon as we joined the first map, End, all the fun started!

    I was a stone at the time, in fact, we all were. The game started. It was normal chests. We fell to our island, grabbed our chests, and started building to eachother right away.

    People slowly started to die. People were shot off, slashed with swords and blown up with TNT. The game was getting intense. Really intense.

    There were now six people left. My friends and I, and three others. Michael was then suddenly shot off while he was building to mid. It scared me to death, because I was right behind him! Luckily, I made a lucky shot and shot him off.

    It was ava and I against another team of two, and the worst part was, we had no idea where they were. We were frantically searching when we suddenly spotted them!

    Ava started mining around an island that Michael said he saw them on. One of them hit ava off the edge, so I flew down and killed them both, winning the game!

    "Wow that was so intense" I said aloud!

    Thanks for participating!
     
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    Made up adventure?
     
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    Can it be funny? I mean obviously but just pretty much all of it funny? beacause thats what i'm only good at lol
     
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    Well think is it creative?
     
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    Does it have to be a story perhaps about a person playing minecraft? Or a minecraft character in the minecraft world? (hope that makes sense lmao)
     
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    Although I don't mind, can it be real life or just only minecraft?
     
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    Oops, didn't see :3
     
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    I wish it didn't have to be about Minecraft, I just wrote a great horror story on the spot that my friends loved, but oh well, I can try anyway...
     
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    You could write a horror themed Minecraft story
     
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    "I stood paralyzed in the endless darkness of the cave, the depths spiraling down into the darkness. Fear struck me to my core, and the nightmare appeared before my very eyes. All hope disippated as my hearts were destroyed into oblivion by the daemon - for as I looked into its darkness infused eyes, all I could see was what to become of me, just like he had. My friend, a zombie, come back for me."
    I just made that up on the spot (not a submission lol) and no offense but trying to make Minecraft horrifying is pretty laughable and cheesy :b Maybe other genres would be more suitable? Although I'm curious to see someone try to do horror :p
     
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    COME ON! I just wrote a 5 paragraph essay that was 9 pages long :( No matter what! I will enter. And I will win... @kkbubble
     
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    Do you care if there is alot of violence, like war scenes?
     
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    I assume this is not open to parkour builders. :D
     
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    GUYS DO WHA YOU WANT, The only restriction is that it must be Minecraft based.
     
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    It's open to everybody, that's why I put the give away option
     
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    Awkward moment where I gave Pervati storylines for a bunch of themes because they couldn't think of storylines themselves.. Parkour builder isn't necessarily story writer xD
     
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