[SOLO SKYWARS] Oriental [ACCEPTED]

Discussion in 'Accepted Community Maps' started by RickDeKlomp, Dec 9, 2019.

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  1. RickDeKlomp

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    Map name: Oriental
    Creator: RickDeKlomp

    This is my first map I've ever created. I wanted to make an Oriental themed map, so I did! I've always liked Oriental themed houses, and I like the Oriental theme overall.
    This map can house 12 people. There is food on each spawn island (hay). There are 12 spawn islands, 4 sub-mid islands and 1 middle island. There are different aspects of PvP in this map. You can try to knock your enemies off the sub-mid islands, but try not to fall into the void :p

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    Updates:
    • Decorated both middle island and the spawn islands.
    • Changed the bridges + decorated them.
    • Changed the sub-mid. This current sub-mid gives a unique playstyle.
    • The little islands differ in height.
    • Added ores to the middle island and spawn islands.
    • Changed chest locations on mid/sub-mid. The total amount of chests is the same.
    • Made the backs of the spawn islands less square.
    Huge, huge thanks to @FireExcalibur10 for helping me improve the map!!

    Please vote whether you like this map or not.
    Both positive and negative feedback is appreciated!

    Rick
     
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  2. FireExcalibur10

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    For its first impression is a dope map! I really like how you built the houses and the layout is cool. Points I dislike:
    - Inner islands need to be bigger for having space to pvp better. Try making another cool design of it. You could build like shurikens instead of a green floating island.
    -At the mid island, try mixing green terracota wity the grass so it creates a better texture. Use little dots of green terracota.
    That were fairly minor errors, I'd say yes to it. Would love to see it in game for a good checkout tho. Maybe I could give you some tips once I see it. Good work ;)
     
  3. RickDeKlomp

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    I'll mix the grass with some green terracota. About the sub-mid, I totally agree, I'll try something cool! Thanks for your feedback!
     
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    I really like the simple design for the map but I find that the sub-mid islands look a bit barren. Maybe some sort of pattern would work or you could just use a different block than grass. The middle island just looks like a world-edit circle on the edges so some sort of slight regular indentation would work well to give it more shape. Other than that, great job!

    Just an edit: The grass around the backs of the buildings looks very square so maybe round that out?
     
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    I think it's a very good map! But i think it's a little empty, but if you add more things, i would like to be added.
     
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    Changed the sub-mid. Fixed the backs of the spawn islands.
    I decided to keep the middle island like it is. I think a circle looks quite good in the middle of this map. The bridges also make it less of a circle.

    Added more "things".
     
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    Now
    Now it's a 20/10 map ;D
     
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    I like everything but the sub-mid. It looks too risky and perhaps tedious for PvP. I'd recommend to make it safer to walk on (or just bring those platforms closer together?). But the rest of the map is just amazing!
     
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    Nice design!
     
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    That's kinda the idea haha. I wanted to make a map which has a different playstyle than other maps. You can be at mid in under 15 seconds. And about the risk, these are 3-jumps so if you place a block in front of you, its almost impossible to fail.
     
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    This map gives me flashbacks to the old-old Cubecraft Lobby, that alone already makes it a good map! I see this is an updated version and you did great, since i have no things i dislike, apart from the green sub-islands, that could maybe fit the theme more. Well done!
     
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  12. Yoya

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    Hey, this map loos pretty nice! I like the lay-out, the builds look okay and there is enough space for pvp. I'll probable make some small changes. If you could send the the schematic that would be great!
     
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