Builds Map feedback (again sorry)

[PizzaOnToast]

Hey again, I have worked more on my map submission, and I just wanted to get a bit more feedback, again, I am open to all criticism. -Note: the other team's island is not made yet

btw, if you would like a screenshot of a certain angle just reply

Spoiler: Angle 1

Spoiler: Angle 2

Spoiler: Top

 

[Maaarijn]

Looks good! Isn't the building a little too small for a blockwars map tho?

 

[ItzEnd3r]

I would replace the dark oak (in the floor, not the walls) with normal oak or birch to give it some contrast

 

[ReMD0G]

This Looks Is A Better Map Than Others Because You Cannot Fall Off Easily.

 

[Savvy]

Okay so I just replied to your 1st post of this lol. But its improving a lot. Heres my feedback.

1)Make the house bigger (Like the the size of the castle in the map Castle, picutre at bottom). And make the terrain less square and even out the logs, rocks, trees etc.
2)I suggest making a broken bridge to mid (not connecting). The ending of the bridge can be similar to your other two path ways.
3)Flag and spawn pictures
4) Bedrock or Java?

Good thing you can copy and paste the 1st half :). Anyways Good Luck!

 

[PizzaOnToast]

Looks good! Isn't the building a little too small for a blockwars map tho?

I take it you are referencing the tower at mid?

 

[PizzaOnToast]

Thanks to everyone for the feedback! I guess I have some work cut out for me!
Btw I will credit everyone for the feedback :)
And also Savvy, the map is on / for bedrock

 

[PizzaOnToast]

So i've done some work and came up for an idea for an expansion, please reply what you think! (I have got tow designs) sorry for the lack of continuity in building

 

[FireExcalibur10]

Those path blocks are not allowed on the server. Use 1.9+ blocks on the builds if you are going to submit a map.

 

[Maaarijn]

I take it you are referencing the tower at mid?

No I mean the house. Is it the spawnpoint and where the flag will be?

Edit: I think with the expansion you did it is a lot better!

 

[Maaarijn]

Those path blocks are not allowed on the server. Use 1.9+ blocks on the builds if you are going to submit a map.

Aren't the path blocks 1.9 blocks? I swear I've seen them in a Lucky Islands map.

 

[Deleted member 529794]

as @DMR_Marijn said it does look great! but a but too small for a map!

 

[Deleted member 529794]

(sorry about the complaint)

 

[Fermiin]

Hey again, I have worked more on my map submission, and I just wanted to get a bit more feedback, again, I am open to all criticism. -Note: the other team's island is not made yet

btw, if you would like a screenshot of a certain angle just reply

Spoiler: Angle 1

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Spoiler: Angle 2

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Spoiler: Top

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It's a really nice and admirable map, I like the types of constructions you do. Can you tell me what mode that map would be available for?

 

[PizzaOnToast]

It's a really nice and admirable map, I like the types of constructions you do. Can you tell me what mode that map would be available for?

Thanks for the compliment, it is for Blockwars on bedrock!

 

[Fermiin]

Thanks for the compliment, it is for Blockwars on bedrock!

Ok, this isvery good, is very nice

 

[sexy]

It looks very good! I would like to play in it!

 

[Deleted member 193885]

Looks great :)

 

[PizzaOnToast]

Aren't the path blocks 1.9 blocks? I swear I've seen them in a Lucky Islands map.

Looking at the wiki, they were added in 1.9

 

[FiIipe]

Looks amazing!