Builds [DUELS] Nightmare

[Assault]

Name Map: Nightmare
Name Creators: _EliteAssault, RP3110GO, IamDonna, xGetRektByKamiel and _EliteOrqnge

Discription: The map where you fight between the 2 dragons in the most scary place on earth. Blood everywhere ... and so many dead people too! A Nightmare...

 

[JDgamers]

Seems nice, but I think that the heads of the dragons needs to be more detailed.

 

[LlTE]

really cool map ^^

 

[Myth by 1]

no idea, just perfect ._.

 

[Queen Ualala]

The podzol and coarse dirt looks extremely random. It appears as if it’s static to the eye. Instead of using that wand just clump some podzol here and there, it’ll look much better.

 

[Meiske]

First of all, nice job on making a map!

I personally think that ‘Nightmare‘ doesn’t really fit this map since nightmares could literally be about anything. The dragons could use a bit more work .. the flowers also look kinda random and don’t really fit well imo. I’m not a builder though, so leave it up to the pros to give you some better tips - I was just pointing out what I think could be better.

Good Luck!

 

[kruisboogaapje]

...the flowers also look kinda random and don’t really fit well imo....

As an idea: You could maybe change the red flowers to a wither Rose. I think it would fit the theme better. And I think the dragons head is just to simple.
Besides that, good job!

 

[Story]

Hello _EliteAssault, thank you for your efforts in submitting this.

Unfortunately, the design team have decided to deny this map submission due to the following reasons:

• The dragons could look much more like dragons however with your limited space on duels is very difficult.
• The two dragons also look copy and pasted, they are noticeably identical.
• The map is too generic.