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CrystalMoonlight94

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Hello! This is my first story! I'm currently working on chapter one, so here's a prologue/preview.


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Prologue - "The Apocalypse"

It has been years since the apocalypse has began. The world has been overrun by zombies, and aliens, and many more dangerous things. We have been unable to defeat them. We are in hiding.

We humans are now considered an endangered species. We have been desperately trying to find a way the counter these dangerous things that have destroyed our world, but to no avail. We're hiding deep underground to take shelter from the many things that we fear. No one is safe. Nobody knows, or is sure that this dark age will end.

But we do know that no matter what, we should never go the surface, because if we do...

We die.

But what we didn't know, was that an even bigger threat would arrive, and only those who touched a fallen star from the sky could save us all...
~~~~~


So, yeah. The story takes place in an apocalyptic future in which we're being overrun by zombies, aliens, and other crazy stuff, so we're hiding deep underground. I'm currently working on chapter one as we speak, so be patient. And if you're wondering why the title is "Let The Stars Fall Down"... It's gonna be an important plot point, starting with chapter 2.

Oh, and remember to leave feedback! I'm looking forward to hear what you think so far and how I can improve, so that I can make the improved, final version for my Wattpad.
 

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Hello! This is my first story! I'm currently working on chapter one, so here's a prologue/preview.


~~~~~
Prologue - "The Apocalypse"

It has been years since the apocalypse has began. The world has been overrun by zombies, and aliens, and many more dangerous things. We have been unable to defeat them. We are in hiding.

We humans are now considered an endangered species. We have been desperately trying to find a way the counter these dangerous things that have destroyed our world, but to no avail. We're hiding deep underground to take shelter from the many things that we fear. No one is safe. Nobody knows, or is sure that this dark age will end.

But we do know that no matter what, we should never go the surface, because if we do...

We die.

But what we didn't know, was that an even bigger threat would arrive, and only those who touched a fallen star from the sky could save us all...
~~~~~


So, yeah. The story takes place in an apocalyptic future in which we're being overrun by zombies, aliens, and other crazy stuff, so we're hiding deep underground. I'm currently working on chapter one as we speak, so be patient. And if you're wondering why the title is "Let The Stars Fall Down"... It's gonna be an important plot point, starting with chapter 2.

Oh, and remember to leave feedback! I'm looking forward to hear what you think so far and how I can improve, so that I can make the improved, final version for my Wattpad.
I like it :3 When you upload it on Wattpad, you should tag me ^^ xD
 

CrystalMoonlight94

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I have some more name ideas..

Florence
Josephine
Georgia
Jasmine
Azalea
Aurora
Felicity
Gabriela
Juliet
Sophia
and Courtney
Out of the names you came up with here, I like Aurora the best. <3
Also, Sophia iz my lil sis.

Now, all the names we have so far...

Ashley
Aria
Arianna
Aurora
Ava
Azalea
Charlotte
Christina
Courtney
Felicity
Florence
Gabriela
Georgia
Jasmine
Joanna
Josephine
Juliet
Kendra
and Sophia.

Anyone else have any ideas before I decide which name to use tomorrow?
 
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CrystalMoonlight94

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Aimee ofc.. Jk

Seriously:

Katie
Katrina
Katherine
Abigail
Serena
Charlotte
Samantha
Zoe
Katie and Katherine are really good. :D

Mmkay, so now we have...

Abigal
Ashley
Aria
Arianna
Aurora
Ava
Azalea
Charlotte
Christina
Courtney
Felicity
Florence
Gabriela
Georgia
Jasmine
Joanna
Josephine
Juliet
Katie
Katherine
Katrina
Kendra
Samantha
Serena
Sophia
Zoe
 
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