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Let The Stars Fall Down (My first story)

Discussion in 'Media' started by CrystalMoonlight94, Nov 15, 2014.

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Do you like the idea/story so far, and will you leave feedback?

  1. Yes! I'll give feedback too!

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  2. No. I will explain why I don't like it, and how you can improve.

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  3. It's interesting. I'll continue reading, just to see what happens next. I'll leave feedback later.

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  4. I like it, but I don't feel like leaving feedback.

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  1. CrystalMoonlight94

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    Hello! This is my first story! I'm currently working on chapter one, so here's a prologue/preview.


    ~~~~~
    Prologue - "The Apocalypse"

    It has been years since the apocalypse has began. The world has been overrun by zombies, and aliens, and many more dangerous things. We have been unable to defeat them. We are in hiding.

    We humans are now considered an endangered species. We have been desperately trying to find a way the counter these dangerous things that have destroyed our world, but to no avail. We're hiding deep underground to take shelter from the many things that we fear. No one is safe. Nobody knows, or is sure that this dark age will end.

    But we do know that no matter what, we should never go the surface, because if we do...

    We die.

    But what we didn't know, was that an even bigger threat would arrive, and only those who touched a fallen star from the sky could save us all...
    ~~~~~


    So, yeah. The story takes place in an apocalyptic future in which we're being overrun by zombies, aliens, and other crazy stuff, so we're hiding deep underground. I'm currently working on chapter one as we speak, so be patient. And if you're wondering why the title is "Let The Stars Fall Down"... It's gonna be an important plot point, starting with chapter 2.

    Oh, and remember to leave feedback! I'm looking forward to hear what you think so far and how I can improve, so that I can make the improved, final version for my Wattpad.
     
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    I like it so far :3
     
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    Thanks! <3
     
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    Glad you liked it! :D
     
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    I like it :3 When you upload it on Wattpad, you should tag me ^^ xD
     
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    Thankies! :3
    Sure thing!
     
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    Thank you! :D
     
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    Also guys, I need a name for the main heroine in the story. Preferably a pretty name. Any ideas?
     
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    Arianna or Aria or Charlotte I like those names :p
     
  14. CrystalMoonlight94

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    I really like Aria. It sounds so... Hero-like. Or however you spell it. XD
    I'm gonna wait for more names to pop up though. Just in case there are even more cool names. xD
     
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    Ashley, Kendra, Christina, Ava and Joanna :)
     
  16. CrystalMoonlight94

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    I really like Ashley. <3

    Mmkay, so far we have...

    Aria
    Ashley
    Arianna
    Kendra
    Charlotte
    Christina
    Ava
    and Joanna.

    So far Aria is my fave. <3
     
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    I have some more name ideas..

    Florence
    Josephine
    Georgia
    Jasmine
    Azalea
    Aurora
    Felicity
    Gabriela
    Juliet
    Sophia
    and Courtney
     
  18. CrystalMoonlight94

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    Out of the names you came up with here, I like Aurora the best. <3
    Also, Sophia iz my lil sis.

    Now, all the names we have so far...

    Ashley
    Aria
    Arianna
    Aurora
    Ava
    Azalea
    Charlotte
    Christina
    Courtney
    Felicity
    Florence
    Gabriela
    Georgia
    Jasmine
    Joanna
    Josephine
    Juliet
    Kendra
    and Sophia.

    Anyone else have any ideas before I decide which name to use tomorrow?
     
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    Seriously:

    Katie
    Katrina
    Katherine
    Abigail
    Serena
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    Samantha
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  20. CrystalMoonlight94

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    Katie and Katherine are really good. :D

    Mmkay, so now we have...

    Abigal
    Ashley
    Aria
    Arianna
    Aurora
    Ava
    Azalea
    Charlotte
    Christina
    Courtney
    Felicity
    Florence
    Gabriela
    Georgia
    Jasmine
    Joanna
    Josephine
    Juliet
    Katie
    Katherine
    Katrina
    Kendra
    Samantha
    Serena
    Sophia
    Zoe