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Noodles77

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I have finished my builder application. My main plot is themed: Dead Planet. This imaginary world in crisis is so polluted that people must live in biospheres to survive. There is a train in between biospheres and a small walkway from the trains to the biosphere. That walkway is a contamination hall where visitors will be cleaned of the diseases they could bring in.
Screen Shot 2014-09-05 at 8.58.42 AM.png Screen Shot 2014-09-05 at 8.59.03 AM.png Screen Shot 2014-09-05 at 8.59.18 AM.png Screen Shot 2014-09-05 at 8.59.21 AM.png Screen Shot 2014-09-05 at 8.59.37 AM.png Screen Shot 2014-09-05 at 9.00.12 AM.png Screen Shot 2014-09-05 at 9.00.28 AM.png The Ip to the plot is 148;45.

Here is some more of my builds to show some diversity...
Screen Shot 2014-09-05 at 9.01.03 AM.png Screen Shot 2014-09-05 at 9.01.27 AM.png Screen Shot 2014-09-05 at 9.01.37 AM.png These plots are right next to my main one but if you still need help finding them the IPs are 147;46 and 149;46.

I would say my skills are in building is landscapes/terraforming, and basically any large build. I don't like building small houses. Manly because I can't :P. Anyways,
@killerkwile, @Efcluke94, @TheAdventurerMM, @SunshineChick, and @musemat. I hope you like it!
 

Trickmaster

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Great concept/idea.

It's a very good build, and it fits to the theme. However, while the theme is deserted, deserted doesn't have to be boring :P the stone terraforming, it is good but very boring. Alternate blocks, not just stone, but blocks like cobblestone, gravel, stone bricks, mossy/cracked stone bricks, etc. That way it's way more interesting, yet it still is deserted with the dull gray texture. Also, add some dead looking wildlife, like sand and dead bushes, and acacia wood trees. (Custom built ofc) with cobwebs as leaves. Or even just the bare wood. The idea is wonderful and unique, but spice up the block choice a bit. Deserted doesn't always mean boring.
 

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I like them but they could have more blocks and colors added to them they need more to them it's kinda plain that probably wouldn't get you builder if you couldn't mix colors well enough to even do them, as kadeplays said you'r a great builder just be a bit more comfortable on showing off some skills and you ever know what you might find. Btw loved the dino bones one :)
 

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Notice @Terrarialover11, @kadeplays and @Trickmaster. If you look closely. I DID add more blocks already. o_O
True, but I think you don't have enough of those extra blocks. Right now, it's pretty much all stone with a sprinkle of cobblestone here and there. Make the terrain all of those blocks, making stone only slightly more abundant. For example, try 20% gravel, 30% cobblestone, 30% stone, 10% cracked stone brick, 10% mossy stone brick. And while the theme is deserted, you could make it look like it was once a grand city but was nuked/destroyed. Add stairs, slabs, netherrack, fire, and make it look destroyed possibly. It would look WAY more interesting, and fits to the theme :)
 
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Sorry noodles but your just not there yet. The actual plot lacks some important details and that 'wow' factor, just looks a little plain for me, I think you need more time. Also perhaps finishing all your plots, then converting one into a map if possible. For example; the dinosaur, you could surround it with huge grass, flowers, more dinosaurs, fossils, bones. Get the most out of a build to make it look as epic as possible. Please don't let this dishearten you, it took seal a few goes, and she progressed so much and is now a valuable part of the build team.
 
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