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McgamerBroFTW

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here are some screenshots of what I have made so far. I know it`s not very big, but I want you to tell me what more I should build. It`s not easy to think it up alone D:
 

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I am going to tell you what I really think about it. I Think it's poorly made and contains less than it should. I guess the size could be okay, but not the islands and what's else in it.

First of all, it looks bad with the water. It should look like an ocean with different depths and such, instead it looks like a big shallow swimming pool.

Secondly, there is too much water between the "islands". It would be too easy to see people when they swam between the places and you wouldn't have any good ways of hiding or running from hunters. Do you see the cows that are spread around in your screenshots? That is how the players would look like.

Thirdly, I Think most of the things (you call them islands) that are spread around in your pool looks ugly. Flat, Square things that shows exactly the stuff that is on them. As I wrote before, you can see eerything that is on the islands and know exactly where the chest are. Even a small map needs stuff.

Also, what is the thing on Picture Three?

Even if I Think that the boat is kind of cute, it doesn't fit in to this map at all, as none of the rest stuff does.

Sorry if some grammar parts of this post looks weird, but I am on my mother's computer and for some reason it puts some letters in to Capitals and deletes other parts.

I hope that you don't take my post as an offense, but I Thought that I should be honest about it.

//Sky
 
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I am going to tell you what I really think about it. I Think it's poorly made and contains less than it should. I guess the size could be okay, but not the islands and what's else in it.

First of all, it looks bad with the water. It should look like an ocean with different depths and such, instead it looks like a big shallow swimming pool.

Secondly, there is too much water between the "islands". It would be too easy to see people when they swam between the places and you wouldn't have any good ways of hiding or running from hunters. Do you see the cows that are spread around in your screenshots? That is how the players would look like.

Thirdly, I Think most of the things (you call them islands) that are spread around in your pool looks ugly. Flat, Square things that shows exactly the stuff that is on them. As I wrote before, you can see eerything that is on the islands and know exactly where the chest are. Even a small map needs stuff.

Also, what is the thing on Picture Three?

Even if I Think that the boat is kind of cute, it doesn't fit in to this map at all, as none of the rest stuff does.

Sorry if some grammar parts of this post looks weird, but I am on my mother's computer and for some reason it puts some letters in to Capitals and deletes other parts.

I hope that you don't take my post as an offense, but I Thought that I should be honest about it.

//Sky
Agreed
 

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Why would you care?
It needs to be bigger, way bigger. It needs to be able to support up to 16 players. And, as all the others said, it needs more detail.
For example, that snow hill, its basically just a pyramid. Try making it look natural.
 

Skyisaboss

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I actually got an idea when I saw this map. How do I put up a world for download and for how many people should it be built?
 

OrangeGE

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I think that you need to add depth to the water, or at least Lilly pads for the player to get to the islands, or half of the game would be just swimming in a shallow pool of water..
 
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