[SOLO EGGWARS] Olympus (remake)

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Should this map be added?

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  2. No

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  1. FireExcalibur10

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    Map name: Olympus
    Creator: FireExcalibur10
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    Hello there!
    As you probably know there was a solo eggwars map called Olympus before, and got removed. I really liked playing in that map so I thought, "Why I don't make a new version of it?". And that's what I come up with, hope you like it. The map is for solo eggwars featuring 8 islands, on each island it has 3 generators, 1 for each material (diamond, gold...). I made it without any inner islands because is so easy to get to mid with a few blocks. On the mid I made the Partenon temple that has 2 diamond generators and 1 emerald. Under the temple there are 2 generators of gold, 1 of diamond and iron generators.
    For those who may wonder if is a downloaded map, it's not. All made by me during 4 days :)
    So, if you have any doubt or suggestions feel free to post it below!
     

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    Looks super cool and detailed to me! Mid is easily accesible and the islands are not too far and not too close to each other. Great job!
     
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    Thanks buddy!!
     
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    Looks good
     
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    Amazing map man! i hope u get designer sooon :D
     
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    Looks really good!
     
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    Haha thanks man!
     
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    it's a great map but mid is a bit unlogical, I think the gens at mid should get a little tiny revamp. I tried to edit your picture but my editing skills = trash so yeh, I hope you understand it. upload_2019-8-20_19-3-29.png

    pretty much you have each generator placed diagonally
     
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    Yeh dont worry will edit them later :p thanks for letting me know.
     
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    About the glass thing xd, I already removed them so dont worry! Second, the temple. They are not wool blocks, they are lapis and yellow terracota, I used them to re-create some of the ancient pictures they had on the temple. Thanks for your comment Simply!
     
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    I like the design and texture, etc. but maybe you can make somewhere the logo from cubecraft or their abbreviation like what they did on the map 'Paint'.
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    I like to see you squeezing in the cube logo in the building at middle.
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    Trust me, not enough space for writing it hahaha but will try I guess.
     
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    Very interesting map, however I'm not a fan. I personally like the original map better but this is a unique map of it's own. Where to begin, it feels more like a Bedwars map due to the way it's layout and doesn't feel like Egg Wars. I know in the past you did a different layout for your Excalibur map and you know how I feel about that. I don't like how you put CCG it made the building a bit ugly and it's 100% pointless. The map it's self doesn't look that good. The "statues?" or whatever holding rocks look pretty bad due to using multiple textures's/blocks and it's built so oddly it's barely recognizable. Not to mention why is he holding stone bricks? It should be cobblestone. Also, why include it if it's a remake it should be around the same, right? The map is also a bit disgusting with how much WHITE is added. It's all just quartz and it's a way too much. The quartz pillars are typically supposed to hold up something not be out in the open. I'd recommend you look up some references to Olympus builds along with the original map that was made. The weird grey blobs and quartz spires are weird and not necessary. I've noticed you used them in a few other builds regardless of the theme. The tops of the main building are very odd looking and a little too vanilla along with the odd rock formation in the corners of the main building. The inside building has meh decorations and the thrown looks pretty bad compared to many of your previous builds. The main island is quite small for combat and feels like it could have many areas to hide and camp. The random wood planks in the bottom of the island stick out and seem like you went for multiple styles. Also personal tip. NEVER add grass with green clay. It defeats the purpose of using green clay in the first place and makes it really weird. Finally, the people carrying rocks islands are kinda pointless and would breed camping as PVP should be localized and centered at middle and at other islands. There is normally no point in going to these islands unless you personally want to lengthen the game. The blue and yellow pattern on the main building is also not needed and takes AWAY from the theme. Also, the houses on home base compared to the middle are almost not the same theme. The player islands seem way to modern and don't use the same roof or other features that make it Olympus. I'd also like to see more on what MAKES it Olympus. It could be many other themes you know?

    On the positive note, I love the addition of the emerald generator and you certainly didn't hold back with how many generators you added. And although the pillars are super white they are pretty despite that. You should maybe add some vines as it might add to it.

    Hope you get something out of this response. The map its self is a good attempt and surely is unique and interesting but I don't believe it's ready to be a CCGN map yet. Thanks and let me know if you want help or something. <3
     
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    And what am I supposed to do with this response???

    I mean I know what it is despite the concept and the build being nothing alike but so do you have a response to what I said?
     
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