[Skywars] Autumn

Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by slcww, Sep 27, 2019.

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Should this map be added

  1. Yes

    15 vote(s)
    68.2%
  2. No

    8 vote(s)
    36.4%
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  1. slcww

    slcww Member

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    This is my second map i made for cubecraft my other map wasent good
    it cost me 23 Hours to make i hope you like it -

    So now i made a better map called Autumn.
    Autumn is my favorite time of the year. I saw cubecraft has a snowy map.
    im not the biggest fan of the winter. So i did my best to make what i see
    and like in the Autumn.

    Islands:

    Start islands:

    There are 12 Start islands
    (they have a custom tree fancy mine and Mushroom)
    3 chests on the start islands 2 above one In the mine
    To go to the intermediate island you need 5-6 blocks

    Intermediate Island:
    Each of this islands (4)
    [North ,East South, West]
    has 2 chests
    to go to the middle it cost you 5-6 blocks

    Middle:
    The middle has a Babyfox Sleeping with a flower past him
    (on the middle you can find 5 Chests)

    It dont worked to post fotos here so i used imgur
    Link: https://imgur.com/gallery/oKZFGK3

    Sorry for my bad english
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    I hope you like my map
    Please vote what you like
    Your vote counts!
    <3


    ~ slcww
     
  2. xXIIIIIIXx

    xXIIIIIIXx Member

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    xXIIIIIIXx
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    Looks awesome.+1
     
  3. SpookyCreatures

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    CraftCreatures
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    I love simple maps :eek: +1
     
  4. EggBoyOrNot

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    ItsReapz
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    Noice noice! :D
     
  5. RickDeKlomp

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    Seems like a cool and simply map. The middle could be a little bigger though. Looks awesome!
     
  6. Siftenly

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    Obsidian
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    Oh, that's a cool map you got there!
     
  7. Riley

    Riley Member

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    Priley
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    Okay so, I'll begin with the islands themselves.
    I don't think the spruce and birch planks fit very well, nor do the coloured stained clay blocks. The very bottom of the islands has practically 0 block variation, try to mix in a little more andesite :D

    The sub-mid in itself is alright, but it seems very tedious to PvP on it due to the cramped space. I'd suggest to make the island slightly larger or make the pumpkin slightly smaller :p

    The middle is just... I don't know what it is, honestly? Looking close, it's just a bunch of random blocks thrown together. Choose a block palette and stick to it. Looking to it from a distance, is it a fox or a deer? All in all, it also seems a pain to PvP there due to, again, cramped space

    In general: I know the first thing that comes to mind with 'autumn' are colours like red, yellow and brown. As of now, it just feels like a coloring book, especially with the carpets on top of the sugar cane (pro tip: string)
    I also think the birch logs should be replaced with the regular oak logs. Not only because they are brown and would mix better with the crown of the tree, but also because players could chop some of them down and convert them to wood. My OCD will get triggered if I have two different types of planks in my inventory



    And then still: to me, it doesn't feel like such an outstanding nor amazing map that must be added. Feels like I've seen it a thousand times: basic, grassy spawn island with a tree. It's just a bit boring if you don't mind me saying
     
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  8. TheSadPotato_

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    looks great ;o
     
  9. SpookyFinixly

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    To less space to PvP imo, even it's a really good map
     
  10. Marieke2001

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    Mehriekehh
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    Okey so first things first. Your creativity is awesome and definitely has potential. I love the birch trees with the clay. The curled up fox is more than sweet, but you can’t really see clearly what it is. What my main issue is, is the PvP space and the space between the islands, submids and mid. The islands need to be a bit bigger, to make it easier to PvP. You need 6 blocks to go to submid and 6 blocks from submid to mid, which makes is far too easy to reach someone’s island and to rush to mid. I’d rather have some more blocks between it, more like 10-12 so that bows, snowballs and eggs still have a function in this map. There are some more small issues, some blocks seem really misplaced like the dirt underneath the island, but it really is a good start and like I said, it has potential.
     
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  11. Bacup_GM

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    [QUOTE = "slcww, post: 1072311, member: 496917"] Este es mi segundo mapa que hice para cubecraft, mi otro mapa no era bueno
    me costó 23 horas para hacer espero que les guste

    Así que ahora hice un mejor mapa llamado Otoño.
    El otoño es mi época favorita del año. Vi cubecraft tiene un mapa nevado.
    No soy el mayor fanático del invierno. Así que hice lo mejor que pude para hacer lo que veo
    y como en otoño.

    Islas:

    Islas de inicio:

    Hay 12 islas de inicio
    (tienen un árbol personalizado, una mina y un hongo)
    3 cofres en las islas de inicio 2 arriba de uno En la mina
    Para ir a la isla intermedia necesitas 5-6 bloques

    Isla intermedia:
    Cada una de estas islas (4)
    [Norte, este, Sur, Oeste]
    tiene 2 cofres
    ir al medio te cuesta 5-6 bloques

    Medio:
    El medio tiene un Babyfox durmiendo con una flor junto a él
    (en el centro puedes encontrar 5 cofres)

    No funcionó publicar fotos aquí, así que usé imgur
    Enlace: https://imgur.com/gallery/oKZFGK3

    Perdón por mi mal ingles
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    Espero que les guste mi mapa
    Por favor vota lo que quieras
    ¡Tu voto cuenta!
    <3


    ~ slcww [/ CITA]
    se ve muy bien para rushers
     
  12. Agent004

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    I could see the map, and I liked the type of map it is, because it is a map of rushers, you could talk to the construction manager and present the map, it would not be the first time they put a map of a user.

    Good work, keep doing the good work.

    ~ Greetings
     
  13. Simbaaa

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    Simbaaa
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    I like the idea, but I think some more detail and variety could be added to the map as a whole. Maybe some more designs and maybe change up some of the placements of things. Also, the map seems just a tad too cramped, but that's just my opinion.

    I'd say after a bit of updating, this would be a good edition to the server :)
     
  14. SpookyFinixly

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    I really love the design of this map. Enough space to PvP! Overall it's looking good. But try to make a english thread next time, basically I don't understand what you said in the submission.
     
  15. SemDeZeeAppel

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    I would like to play this map.