Builds [Duels] World War (reworked)

[ItzEnd3r]

Hello, The previous submission was not up to the standard that I would've liked it to be so I have decided to completely remake the thread with a much higher quality product. So Here it goes!

I would like to present my second map submission World War! this is a duels map which is themed after World War 2 featuring three Supermarine Spitfire planes bombing the area and leaving a trail of destruction, You can climb the smoke to get some quick high ground, but watch out! falling into the fire could quickly change the outcome of a fight.

Imgur: https://imgur.com/a/G791gg7
Epic Video:

(first time using replay mod don't bully me)

Credit to @Stinesss for this idea (I don't play much Skywars so I didn't feel comfortable making a map for the game, but I hope you like what I have created :))
I would also like to thank @_The13thDoctor_ and @TheJeroen for the great feedback on this map

 

[ItzEnd3r]

@Eli Could you please explain why you voted no?

 

[ItzEnd3r]

@Eli I really want to know what you didn't like so I can fix it and make this map good for everyone.

 

[FireExcalibur10]

@Eli I really want to know what you didn't like so I can fix it and make this map good for everyone.

Tagging him several times wont be helpful.

 

[Axyy]

Tagging him several times wont be helpful.

I do get him though, someone voted no and he just wants to know the person's feedback on how to improve his map :)

 

[ItzEnd3r]

Tagging him several times wont be helpful.

The first time was a few days ago and I assumed that it got buried in his notifs, so I wanted to try again.

 

[FireExcalibur10]

Jesus I voted no accidentally... rubbish phone. Sorry, tbh it is a good looking map with the inprovements you made! I like the world war thematic. Well done.

 

[FireExcalibur10]

Also maybe you could make a second layer up on the walls do is a bit higher

 

[Axyy]

Jesus I voted no accidentally... shitty phone. Sorry, tbh it is a good looking map with the inprovements you made! I like the world war thematic. Well done.

@ItzEnd3r you could edit the poll so FireExcalibur10 can change his vote perhaps? :P

 

[ImJunior]

I like the idea & design of the map but I think it's too big. People can run away for so long.

 

[Technosword]

This map looks great, I hope it gets added! My only feedback maybe create more obstacles so someone can't run away as easily as it's a bigger map.

 

[ItzEnd3r]

@ItzEnd3r you could edit the poll so FireExcalibur10 can change his vote perhaps? :p

yeah ill do that now (votes can now be changed)

 

[SenatorKarma]

Jesus I voted no accidentally... shitty phone. Sorry, tbh it is a good looking map with the inprovements you made! I like the world war thematic. Well done.

@Keanu he used a bad word, warn him

 

[ItzEnd3r]

@LordKarma would you mind explaining why you voted no?

 

[SenatorKarma]

@LordKarma would you mind explaining why you voted no?

Due to the many inaccuracies, trenches often had wooden support beams with caved out sections for sleep, they didny use cannons they had artillery cannons which were typically a reasonable way away from the trenches. No one looks up at the sky so wouldn’t notice the planes nor the bombs being dropped. Two words to sum it up: A mess.

 

[Lukejvc]

I like the map! But it should be a bit smaller :I

 

[Fqnta]

I think it's a great map, but as lukjvc and imjunior said it needs to be a bit smaller, but still.
Nice work!