Builds Created a map for fun!

[Begijntje]

Hey guys!

I've made a map purely for fun, not even to submit, in an attempt to improve my building skills. However, I'd like all the feedback you guys could possibly give me on what I can improve on :) Just give your honest opinion, all is welcome

The theme is a so called 'Favela'

I know, right now it's plain and boring. Still put some effort into it though. I didn't show the terraforming of the middle because it looked rather.... questionable.

Note though, that I am very much a rookie builder, as I've only been getting into it recently.

1: Overview

2 and 3: Two side angles showing the middle from a closer proximity.

4: Spawn island

What do you guys think so far?

 

[Egg🥚]

The buildings on mid are perfect, really love them, but the islands itself (not the buildings!) are kind of symmetrical and boring :)

 

[Begijntje]

The buildings on mid are perfect, really love them, but the islands itself (not the buildings!) are kind of symmetrical and boring :)

Yep, thought so too. I'm very bad at terraforming though so I kept it simple.

 

[ssunsett]

The middle already looks nice but the island is still missing some extra details

 

[Begijntje]

The middle already looks nice but the island is still missing some extra details

You're right.
Thing is... I just don't know what it should be. Even before posting it on here, I knew it had way too few details, but that's what this community is for :) Thanks for the feedback.

 

[JokeKaedee]

Really love the map concept! You've got some great ideas :) You could work on some details for the starter islands, but I think you're already going to work on that. So great job already <3

 

[Begijntje]

Really love the map concept! You've got some great ideas :) You could work on some details for the starter islands, but I think you're already going to work on that. So great job already <3

Thanks :) I'll try my best, I'm already working on some tweaks and changes.

 

[Begijntje]

Alrighty fellas, I've made a few small changes and add-ons on the middle island and reworked the Spawn island :)

Slightly tweaked middle

An interior for what I'll make on the inside of most buildings

Reworked spawn island from the front

From the back

Keep the feedback coming guys :) I'd like to build it to its fullest potential, and as far as my skill allows it.

 

[Egg🥚]

Alrighty fellas, I've made a few small changes and add-ons on the middle island and reworked the Spawn island :)

Slightly tweaked middle
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An interior for what I'll make on the inside of most buildings
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Reworked spawn island from the front
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From the back
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Keep the feedback coming guys :) I'd like to build it to its fullest potential, and as far as my skill allows it.

You could add some leaves or trees too, to add some green. That will always work

And the building on the island is kinda flat. I’d let the top part overhang or something like that. You should experiment with that!

 

[Ignatis]

Hello! Well,I really like the mid island but the spawn islands are kinda plain and boring. An all in all rating would be 6,5/10

 

[JokeKaedee]

I like what you've changed already, but I still feel like the starter islands are a bit basic and square-ish. They could use some shaping! :)