Heyyo, I'm back after quite a long break. Sorry for not keeping in touch with everyone. Thought I'd make a come back with this new hub I designed and built.
Minecraft PC IP: play.cubecraft.net
Builds Back with a NEW Build!!
- Thread starter DreamFudge
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Too long :( All the buildings took me 3 days. Dragon took me two days. Organics and last touches a day
A lot of clicking xD worldedit was used for block replacing and structure movement.
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So I like the build however, there are a few things that could be better with it. Being an organic specialist myself the first thing I look towards is the dragon. Now I feel that the head is ok, shape wise but my first point of contact is the neck. It is way to thin when it reaches the portal. The neck should become thicker as it builds muscle when it works towards the body like this:
Another thing that I can see that could be improved is the terrain. Around the edges of the island the blocks just look really messy. I can see stone the grass and it just doesn't flow. Consider tidying this up a bit as the smallest details can make the build look way better.
Forwarding this I would like the bring to attention the portal, I feel that there should be more around. Where is the rest of the dragon? I feel that a tail should be coming through or a claw in some areas to give the build more composition. Also the portal itself is really boring. It is just two different colours. Where is the magic coming out of it?. Where does it fade into the sky? Circles aren't a naturally occurring shape try making it irregular
That's pretty much all I have for now. It's a great start to a build and I think with a few tweaks it could be much better
Good Job!
¬ Paige
So I like the build however, there are a few things that could be better with it. Being an organic specialist myself the first thing I look towards is the dragon. Now I feel that the head is ok, shape wise but my first point of contact is the neck. It is way to thin when it reaches the portal. The neck should become thicker as it builds muscle when it works towards the body like this:
Another thing that I can see that could be improved is the terrain. Around the edges of the island the blocks just look really messy. I can see stone the grass and it just doesn't flow. Consider tidying this up a bit as the smallest details can make the build look way better.
Forwarding this I would like the bring to attention the portal, I feel that there should be more around. Where is the rest of the dragon? I feel that a tail should be coming through or a claw in some areas to give the build more composition. Also the portal itself is really boring. It is just two different colours. Where is the magic coming out of it?. Where does it fade into the sky? Circles aren't a naturally occurring shape try making it irregular
That's pretty much all I have for now. It's a great start to a build and I think with a few tweaks it could be much better
Good Job!
¬ Paige
Ok so I wanted to reply to this because building is pretty much art and anyone can say "oh it should do so and so to look better" but maybe that is how it's supposed to be as people build things differently, like where you say about the dragons neck is thinner maybe it is supposed to be thinner and have the effect that it's being I guess projected from the portal. About the blocks around the edges of the islands being messy maybe they have been there for many years and changed to be that way, it gives it a nice feel to me.. Then again these are opinions and I just wanted to add mine=^-^= Hey! =^-^=
So I like the build however, there are a few things that could be better with it. Being an organic specialist myself the first thing I look towards is the dragon. Now I feel that the head is ok, shape wise but my first point of contact is the neck. It is way to thin when it reaches the portal. The neck should become thicker as it builds muscle when it works towards the body like this:
Another thing that I can see that could be improved is the terrain. Around the edges of the island the blocks just look really messy. I can see stone the grass and it just doesn't flow. Consider tidying this up a bit as the smallest details can make the build look way better.
Forwarding this I would like the bring to attention the portal, I feel that there should be more around. Where is the rest of the dragon? I feel that a tail should be coming through or a claw in some areas to give the build more composition. Also the portal itself is really boring. It is just two different colours. Where is the magic coming out of it?. Where does it fade into the sky? Circles aren't a naturally occurring shape try making it irregular
That's pretty much all I have for now. It's a great start to a build and I think with a few tweaks it could be much better
Good Job!
¬ Paige
Actually i comment very late. But never too late or how it goes idfk. Nowadays if i would do a comeback my builds wont be anything near ur level, that is amazing.
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