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Skywars Map Submission: Flowers/Garden

Discussion in 'Games' started by ateubs429, May 25, 2014.

  1. ateubs429

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    Hi everyone! The last few days I've been working on a new Skywars Map on my plot and I wanted to know what you guys think. Maybe it could even be published, who knows! :)

    Basically, the theme is like every island is a flower and the middle is a flower pot.

    Made with the help of @xcupcakelovelyx and with inspiration from @kadeplays

    There are 8 islands that I made on the plot, but if it would actually become published, I would change it to 16. Also, the islands are pretty close together, but the spacing could be changed so that they are farther apart. Feedback and suggestions are encouraged! Thank you!

    Plot is -59:92
     

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    More screenshots
     

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  5. Nyanbaz

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    Maybe work on it a tad bit more. Work on the middle, and try to make the rainbow tree-object look more natural, rather than having it be a geometric shape.
    The flowers look ok, but the ores look a little bit out-of-place with the pretty colors =w=

    Hope that helped,
    and good luck.
     
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    Thank you! I've already started to work on the middle so it looks more like a flower. I'll try to work on the ores too. :)
     
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    I like the creativity of the build, but the flowers need work .. maybe ask @LaserDolphin77 if you can view his flowers, he's our flower-master :)
     
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    Okay, thanks Cali. :)
     
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    It's a nice start and could potentially be a nice map. Just add lots of details, and look at Lasers flowers as Cali said.
     
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    Thanks :)

    Anyways already told that the middle is weird and too work on it..but the island flowers are great is my opinion...maybe laser could help on the middle... I vote yes (with a bit of work)
     
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    I am stuck... YOUR TEXTURE PACK IS CONFUSING do u mind taking more screenshots with out that texture pack using default
     
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    I'll switch it to default and then take more screenshots. It would be awesome if Laser could help with the flowers! I also changed the middle so it doesn't look so weird, you can go to the plot to see it.
     
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    Where can I find pictures of Lasers flowers?
     
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    I think this map is nice, middle flower could be worked on though, it looks a bit undetailed, other than that terraformation under that I'd love to play on this map. :)
     
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    Also it'd be appreciated if you could post the next screenshots on default MC, it gives us a better idea of the map. :p
     
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    I'm going on creative right now, so I'll try to add a bit more detail and take screenshots in default. Any suggestions for what detail to add?
     
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    You could turn the middle flower into a 2 block high flower. (Maybe rose bush.)
     
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    Here are default screenshots without any big changes, other than an experimental change in the middle flower.
     

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    EVEN MORE!!! Screen shot 2014-05-26 at 12.04.49 PM.png Screen shot 2014-05-26 at 12.02.20 PM.png Screen shot 2014-05-26 at 12.03.44 PM.png Screen shot 2014-05-26 at 12.04.40 PM.png Screen shot 2014-05-26 at 12.05.59 PM.png Screen shot 2014-05-26 at 12.01.55 PM.png