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TSW-island

Discussion in 'Creative' started by DaanHeerw, Jun 5, 2015.

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  1. DaanHeerw

    DaanHeerw Member

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    Dear Cubecrafters,

    I am busy with an Team-SkyWars island. The theme is ''nether''. But at this time i wan't your feedback.
    Is it nice? is it good-looking? What can i do to make it more funnier? Plz, give me your feedback. Here's the information of the plot;

    Plot ID: -100;-205
     

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    This is way too chaotic, use less blocks, it's just : netherbrick, netherrack, quartz, netherbrick and again etc. I do like the terraforming, so good job on that part.
    Keep up the good work Daan!
     
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    It''s have to be chaotic. That's the nether!
     
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    For me the nether isn't chaotic. But do what you have to do, Good-looking so far, but it could be better.
     
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    Yea, I know, but i can''t build only with Netherbrick,quartz and netherrack. I need more dark blocks, like; coal blocks or something.
     
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    Good island but just what Kemo said
    My tip make the pillars underneath the island longer that just looks a bit better in my opinion and use much lesser quartz ore and soulsand netherbrick is not such a big problem

    And also use gravel

    I think that is will looks much better when you change the bottom to:
    //replace 10%:gravel,10%:soulsand,25%:Nether_bricks,55%:netherrack
    But it look cool tho
    Keep on the good work daan
     
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    It's very good but need to Improve, i really like it c:
     
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    Build a clown.
     
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    It's too messy and quickly built, it looks like you have put all blocks together and used WE.
    For example, Gold ore not really deep, and Quartz and netherbrick way deeper.
    But, with (a lot of) improvements this could turn out in a good build :)
     
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    I quite like it, but the top looks a bit flat and it looks like //set quartz,netherrack,netherbrick ? xD
     
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    It looks very generic. Since the theme nether is very basic to start with, I think you should add some original aspects and concepts to it and loads more detail if you want it to qualify for a TSW map.
     
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    It's great but I will add, like a mini nether-fortification LIKE IN NETHER!!