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Titanic07's Builder App D:

Discussion in 'Creative' started by Titanic27, Oct 13, 2014.

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  1. Titanic27

    Titanic27 Member

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    Hi all! This is my builder application. My plot is 2015;2013 and it looks very impressive at night so that is what I made the pictures, and I am terrified. D:
    Exterior shot:
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    From the air ship
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    The lava raining down on the village
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    Close up on the village
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    Unfortunately I couldn't get close ups on the forest because my computer hates me lel.
    All POSITIVE feedback is welcome. No saying "OMG kid why did you submit this" and more of "The x is too y and that x needs to be over there. But other than that its good."
     
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    I like it :)
     
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    The plot lacks a lot of detail. You could have terraformed some. And the volcano could have had more done to it. I don't think this will be builder worthy.
     
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    It's nice, but It's just a bunch of scattered blocks. If you were to give someone world edit this could be done in 1 command (Without the little village homes). I think you should spend more time on it and add more things like terraforming and more detailed/larger structures. Though don't give up, keep on building on.
     
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    D: Okay. The detail that the plot lacks wasn't open. I read someone elses builder app and I looked down at the little things. Couldn't find any.
     
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    Okay, I didn't use world edit for the volcano. The lava had to be world edited cuz I have a strict schedule. And I'm not entirely sure that any one of you three went and took a look at the plot in person. Which is looking at the books pictures without reading the words (Which is commenting on pictures not the plot.) Also the entire thing is the detailed structures which is why I said to look at the plot in person.
     
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    Didn't "wow" me, sorry.
     
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    ^^
     
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    Okay the only reason I put it up is because it got the wow factor from a lot of people. Guess I must've asked the wrong people for feedback. I specifically wrote "No negative feedback" and that is what I have recieved. If you deny that your posts aren't negative, you told me that it was bad and not what needed work.
     
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    Someone please lock this, I am trying again. With professional help, from builders if you don't mind, Obsidians.
     
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    Builder apps need to be solo.
     
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    It is solo. I meant like feedback.
     
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    Oh, sorry I misunderstood it.
     
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    Basically what we're trying to do is help you see the things that need to be worked on. We aren't necessarily trying to be rude, just stating our opinions. If you want a builders opinion, you should accept it. Everyone gets negative feedback at some point, I guess this was your point.
     
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    Not that "wowish" to me, looks like the ship could be a little spruced up if you know what I mean.
     
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    It sorta reminds me of Mt. Vesuvius when it erupted. Maybe adding a villages using little parts of quarts and sandstone. C=
     
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    Not that i am a professional builder or anything, but anybody can build a volcano.. It isn't necessarily a bad build, it's just that all you have to do is type in //set [red clay id], [red glass id], air,air,air,air,air,air,air,air,air,air,air,air,air and you have an erupting volcano. I actually quite like it, but you're never going to get builder with a volcano because it's just a volcano :/
    That is a genius idea.
    Try an approach like that ^^ Perhaps if you're really into it, get some images of pompeii from google, and copy from that.
     
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    Why would you care?
    I usually made volcanos by placing a bunch of dispensers, facing upwards, with lava on top of it. Then put in stacks and stacks of arrows and connect it to a redstone clock.
    Just a tip :p
     
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    Im afraid you seem to think any opinion on your build is negative. in this case it may be true, however they are just trying to help you. This build is not builder worthy. Also asking for feedback by builders isn't the way to go. Builders have to be able to think for themselves and make right decisions based on their builds on how to improve.
    application declined sorry.

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