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TheProRo ParkourBuilder submission

Discussion in 'Parkour' started by TheProRo, Jul 26, 2015.

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  1. TheProRo

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    hey I have do my adventure parkour =D here are some screenshots and the story is at the end 2015-07-26_10.02.21.png 2015-07-26_10.02.32.png 2015-07-26_10.02.46.png 2015-07-26_10.05.34.png 2015-07-26_10.05.56.png 2015-07-26_10.06.02.png 2015-07-26_10.06.23.png 2015-07-26_10.06.46.png 2015-07-26_10.07.35.png 2015-07-26_10.08.06.png
    One Day A Librarian Villager was counting his emeralds but he want to go to the bathroom.After he go to the bathroom he looked that someone stole his emeralds and put them in another chests that were far away.He was very sad about that and he wanted the emeralds back. One thay an explorer find him and read his book in that moment he also was sad, so he will help the Villager.First he have to follow the gold coins as a parkour, he passed that very good.Then he have to pass a long hall that have pressure plates and he only have to touch the gold ones. He passed that very good but after that he spent a lot of time passing an abandoned place with webs. After that he had to pass a large hall with fire and webs. He was passing and he eat a gold apple and passit good but then he had to do a parkour to get some water.He do the parkour very good and also he dont die. Finally it was the last step that was a super parkour were at the top were the emeralds!!!!He spent like 10 minutes doing the parkour and finally he get the emeralds!!!!! and he give back the emeralds to the villager and the villager pay him with a full diamond and now everyone is happy =D The END
     
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    Hope you like it
     
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    It's a pretty decent story line but the build is bland and pre-built. I would suggest If you want to enter a second time you build it yourself and something more unique. Also the parkour looks pretty short and the area where hitting the floor with impact is blown up and makes the map look like someones spammed tnt.
     
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    I built it alone
     
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    and no the florr thont exptlote it fells and make like a parkour
     
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    floor dont explote it fells down
     
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    like tnt run have you play it?
     
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    Try to post all in one comment, spamming the thread isn't going to help. Also this needs to be moved to "Parkour builder applications"
     
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    I think you took the title a bit too serious.
    Also this isn't even close to the level of the Parkour Builders, sorry.
     
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    yep Agreed. It is lacking building skills, design, parkour and story in the game. I'm sorry but you'll need a lot more than this.
     
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