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Sweetest Nightmare: Adventure Parkour

Discussion in 'Parkour' started by Toweeh ❥, Jul 31, 2015.

  1. Toweeh ❥

    Toweeh ❥ Member

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    Just want to start off by saying that this is not a Parkour Builder Application, it's just a submission or show of it. I'm super proud of the plot alone. Plot ID: 101;-243

    Those who helped:
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    - @Walker_Walkis (Criticism)
    - @PinkStreak (Criticism)


    Now to begin the story.
    "The story of two teenage best friends, whom care not only for themselves, but for each other. What happens when one of them goes missing? Will the other be able to survive? Find out in this new adventure parkour "Sweetest Nightmares", consisting of tears, sweat, strife, heartbreak, and worry. What will fate choose? "

    Maxden and Tori are long term best friends who have decided to exploring because Tori will soon be moving away. Maxden has been unable to focus and a lacking abilities to complete simple tasks. They soon arrive at a sweet wonderland named "SweetieLand" and prepare for what they don't know will be their Sweetest Nightmares.
    From the beginning, Maxden seems to have trouble crossing the "Milky River" and Tori stops him before continuing to give a few wise words.

    *Wise Words*
    Maxden, you are such an amazing best friend and I wouldn't have gotten this opportunity if it were not for you. I will always be by your side, even when I really can't physically be there. You are a shooting star. You need to illuminate a world and extort your light. When I'm gone, the least you could do is remember that you need to "Shine Your Way"...

    Suddenly while climbing the cherry hills, Tori gets lost somewhere within its depts. Maxden does not notice until reaching a giant piece of licorice and needs a helping hand while climbing. Maxden had begun to panic and become very lost and unaware without his best friend. He sat at the top of the licorice crying, when suddenly he could see a faint flashback replaying in his mind. "Shine Your Way. I will always be there to help you, even when I'm not physically able to." A sudden burst of will-power later allows Maxden back onto his two feet and he finds himself "following" this faint flashback of Tori. He crosses the "Witch Curses" road and is on his way to the end of "SweetieLand", which consists of "The Chocolate Canon" known for swallowing humans whole. Upon reaching the end, Maxden sees Tori there waiting for him. Turns out she found her way back and was able to escape. The best friends lived happily ever after.

    *I recommend watching the video while reading or before

     
  2. Toweeh ❥

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    Nice! ;)
     
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    You should write a novel, the story is very very very good. :)
     
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    Aw thanks!<3
     
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    Looks really cool, can't wait to play it myself! And play it again, and play it again, and play it again, and play it again...
     
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    haaha thank you!! <;
     
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    It looks really cool! Gj Tori nub <3
     
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    (sorry for double post) Is this meant to be for Pk Builder? or just submission of a map?
     
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    Balls nevermind, you can delete this and the post ontop xD
     
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    Looks sweet. (See what I did there :p)
     
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    Great Job! Plot looks nice! I have never played creative on cubecraft but looks very nice! I will see if I can check it out!
     
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    the best story ever <3 i love the story, and i like the parkour, in my opinion, you can apply to parkour builder when the staff open the applycations
     
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    Haaa noooo, but thank you though. <3
     
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    i hate it (it's a compliment , parkours are the best when the most people hate it (untill they complete it) (my opinion)
     
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    Nice parkour build looks nice!
     
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    Hi toru! :D
     
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