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Skywars Map Volcano (32 players)

Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by LaloRaptor_YT, Oct 31, 2015.

  1. LaloRaptor_YT

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    Sorry The page post it twice :confused1:
     
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    Sorry but this map lacks a lot of detail, the main one being the volcano itaelf. The terraforming is very week, a volcano needs a super cool mountain and a mix of different blocks. Take the volcano on the build wars lobby for example, the terraforming is great and has a mix of blocks. The homes themselves don't look to good either, the islands need a lot of work. Overall it isn't a terrible attempt, but it needs lot of work to be accepted here.

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    In the future just use normal screenshots without shaders or resource packs.
     
  4. LaloRaptor_YT

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    I havent finished :) it is a sample for me to know what to improve ;)
     
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    1) All the islands are the same. You need at least 4 different island patterns.
    2) The islands are way too basic. They need more detail.
    3) Terraforming is an issue. The bottom of every island is just too simple and should be worked on.
    4) The middle looks like a small hill with lava, not a volcano. And the cloud of smoke should be made out of materials like stained glass and/or cobwebs, not necessarily solid blocks as it makes it look like an upside down mountain on top of the volcano.
    5) The volcano is just floating. Add some terraforming on the bottom to make it look like it was actually pulled from the ground.
    6) The beginning islands are too small. Making them bigger would help a lot.
    7) The enchantment room should not contain that many bookshelves, as it is too overpowered and turns "Normal" into "OP"
    8) Inside the volcano looks like a cave to me, and not something volcano related.

    Next time when posting images don't use shaders or a texture pack so it can be judged by what it truly is without making it look worse/better than the build truly is.
     
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    @Iselciour as I told I am still working on it, it is the base for the rest of the construction, but thanks for giving me tips about, I will use them.
     
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    What he said. :p
     
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    I cant delete this post, it was duplicated by the forum, watch the other one ;)