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Skywars Map FNAF

Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by PaulGamer194, Apr 5, 2016.

  1. PaulGamer194

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    in case the dowload post omentary admin :D
     
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    Too simple - you need to incorporate more terraforming into the build.
     
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    Some islands are smaller than others. Also too simple.
     
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    Pixel art.....,It's allowed, right?
     
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    And Rainbow?
     
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    The map is WAY too simple to be accepted :/

    No, it's not
     
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    Pokemon map? Rainbow map?
     
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    It is far too basic, add some more terraforming and detail.
     
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    Dont like it Its basic what they all said.
     
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    Make sure that all islands are 1. an even ammount of blocks away from each other and 2. an even ammount of blocks away from mid. If this is not the case it would mean that some players will have an advantage on others just because of the Island they spawned on. The game needs to be fair for everyone.

    Also, having a theme is very important. You clearly have a theme but your build looks a little rushed, I don't play FNAF but I kinda know how it works and I've seen some videos, the rooms are always very detailed, that's what makes it scary. Your build is not detailed at all making it so that it isn't scary at all, making it so it's not a clear reference to FNAF. More a random pixel-art bear on a platform with some nice tables around it.

    The idea is there, but try to give it your own twist. Make the builds your own and detail them so that they aren't overdetailed, but give the exact feeling you want people to have when they see it. The WOW feeling.
     
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    True But I still dont like it , My opinion.
     
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    Needs a lot of improvement, yup, also remove more superflat land
     
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    Everything has points to improve, some things have a lot, some have little. Don't you like the theme? Or don't you like the way its build? If the second case is true, maybe instead of just sayin that you don't like it, just give some tips or some of your own ideas. I don't say you have to, but it doesnt really motivate you if someone comes along and just says: ''Nah, don't like it''. Give arguments on why you dont like it so the builder can work on it and make it so that you do like it :D. Benefits for all and we can all be happy yey.
     
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    To simple, it needs more details.
     
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    sorry this just isn't enough of a map for us to use.
     
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    It's a little bit simple. Try to make the Freddy head in the middle 3D with terraforming. Also, try to make the islands more akin to the game, like making them look like the office. Other than that, looks good.
     
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    How about... I eat the bear and kill everyone else?
     
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    I think the idea was definitely there, but it is quite simple. It'd be nice if maybe more detail was put in, and maybe some of the other characters were implemented so it has a more FNAF feel to it. I kind of feel that you could almost do what was done on the pokemon map but only with Freddy, Bonnie, Chica, and Foxy as the spaces 1, 4, 7, & 12, having golden Freddy as the centre. As for how you conduct your pixel art, it's cute, but like others said, terraforming would make it better. The islands also all need to be same sizes and spaces apart, which is an easy fix. Maybe make them look.. somewhat different from each other, though? Like make them very similar but with minor differences like the placing of the tree.
    Just some suggestions.
    (@Camezonda Have fun.)
     
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    jeez Serket with the technical build advice, thanks for making me look bad. I supposed to be the buildy person here.
     
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