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[Parkour] & [Normal] Apply GamesMetBjorn!

Discussion in 'Parkour' started by GamesMetBjorn, Jun 15, 2015.

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  1. GamesMetBjorn

    GamesMetBjorn Member

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    Hey!
    Im exually done with my plot!
    I want to Apply for the Parkour Builder or Parkour!
    My Theme is: A Normal Mountain, that was Stormed by Redsand.
    Its a Desert theme mixed with Stone.
    STORYLINE: You Dropped on a Mission, to get Water. You have to reach the Water. But u cant. Theres only Water in a House. That supposed to be a Restaurant. Its all Empty.

    TAGS: @rick4games @johnyestaloca @GamesMetBjorn.

    Title: DESERT
    Plot ID : 219;-29
     
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    Post some screens
     
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  4. GamesMetBjorn

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    Here are Some of the Photos! 2015-06-15_18.10.59.png 2015-06-15_18.13.01.png
     

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    Someren Screens?
     
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    It's looks kinda plain & the terraforming looks too geometric.
     
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    Ruben Mod Staff Member Moderator

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    It's very basic in my opinion, basically the only blocks you use are red sandstone and stone.
    Also, the two square gaps in the mountain, I don't see why you did that?
     
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    gamesmetbjorn sry but i builded that mountain so you cant apply
     
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    and it must be adventure parkour
     
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    Did rick build the mountain? -,-
     
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    yup i did
    but lagg destroyed it XD
     
  12. Stefanvld

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    So, I've looked at your build, also ingame and I have to say the following things:
    - The terraforming is very plain, and very symmetrical.
    -There isn't much detail.
    -Please use the full plot, that would be nice.
    - You need a good story, and you need to be very good at english, vocabulary and grammar are both very important.

    Regards,

    Stefan ;)

    Good luck with your application
     
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    Edit: You could add things to the story, and add quests and stuff.
     
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    Rick, you made short Mountains. i made it more Bigger. You gave me the idea. You made like 4height on the beginning. (or a little) more. Be serious.
     
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    I agree with everything above and yes, adventure Parkour requires a logical storyline. I hope you will improve your parkour using the tips/hints above as an advantage. Good luck with that :)
     
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    I cant exactly see what the plot is since my permissions are horribly messed up, but from what I see, it just looks like a mountain that only takes up half the plot using 2-3 different block types with other blocks floating in the air (a big nono, blocks have to obey the laws of gravity as well).
     
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    ohh.. ok
     
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    Bjorn i made the whole mountain with //brush and I replaced the ground to redsandstone you did no terra sry to say
     
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