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My Builder Application

Discussion in 'Creative' started by Paco158, Jun 13, 2014.

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  1. Paco158

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    This is my third try at this.
    I cant post more photos then 10 apperantly, ill try to post the rest in a second.
     

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    Here are the rest.
     

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    @Paco158, I appreciate the fact that you tried again, but I don't think it is builder material. For starters, the terraforming needs a lot of work. Seeing as how you are going for small hills on your plot, you really have to focus on the shapes of the hills. The less space you have to work with, the harder you'll have to try to make them look good. Just making grass spheres won't cut it. Secondly, I think the shapes you are using for your structures are a bit boring, but that may just be personal preference. Finally, your walls are pretty flat for the castle and windmill, and the interiors need a little more time put into them to be considered a "good build". I don't think that this plot is builder quality at this point, but with a lot of time and effort spent on it, I think you could really make something pretty cool out of it.
     
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    More block variation. Be more creative
     
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    Look at the plots near spawn, most of them are builders' plots. There is not enough wall detail on the castle to be considered builder material. As Morgan & Peanut said, you need block variation and more terraforming. Build something different and daring, be origional, try something new, add multiple types of blocks, ect. Good luck :)
     
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    What is your plot ID?
     
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    Try making the terraforming look a bit more natural by basing the hill off the sphere, but then adding around it, smaller spheres will also help :) & Maybe have a go at some custom trees as well ;p The buildings need to be fixed up a lot, but basically just what everyone has already mentioned, keep trying:)
     
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    USE DETAIL
     
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    Well, forth times the charm XD.
     
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