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My Builder Application

Discussion in 'Creative' started by TheGeneral550, Sep 28, 2014.

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  1. TheGeneral550

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    So hi! I'm TheGeneral550, but most of my friends on CCG call me Gen or General. This is my builder application! :D The ID is 990;975 and this is basically an enchanted forest, as I like to call it, and yeah! (I'm shaking right now, hope you guys enjoy!)P.S. Sorry if I uploaded WAY too many photos, there's just a lot to show :p 2014-09-27_16.43.57.png 2014-09-27_16.43.45.png 2014-09-27_16.43.28.png
    That's all folks!
     

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    Oh gosh, this looked a LOT more organised in the actual draft... >.< sorry.
     
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    *organized
     
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    I am very sorry for the two house bits at the end...
    This is my first time actually posting a thread so... sorry bout that. :/
     
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    I think the plot needs more terraforming. It looks too flat. And maybe some more detail on the house.
     
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    I have a list of things that you should take into consideration,
    1.) Use the regular mc texture scince most people use that
    2.) It's all in all to basic and doesn't show much theame
    3.) It's kinda well idk it doesn't really WOW me I feel it could use a lot of work
    4.)The homes are a too plain and show barley any detail
    5.)The terraforming is a bit odd and could use some work
    6.)Try and use costum trees instead of just bone meal
    So takes these into consideraton and I feel it could turn out great. :D
     
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    Okay I have a few things to say about this plot. I like the concept of it, but it's missing a few major things. Builders look at the small details in a build because they are the things that make the build come together. From what I can see, all of the trees on the plot are bonemealed and there are no custom trees. The main focus was the waterfall in the back, so I can tell that's where you spent the most time working on it. The land other than the main thing in the back is quite flat and house has very little detail. I'm sorry Gen, I just wasn't completely wow'd.
     
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    Yeah, I understand what you guys mean and I'm not really upsetted by it. ^-^ I know I could've done MUCH better like, custom trees like you guys said and maybe some hills, more flowers, and the roof was just horrific to me. (by roof I mean the flat ceiling i put to make it more.. erm.. dark and dramatic.) I guess I was just so excited about being a builder that I didn't realize what it took to become one. I see my flaws and I know I said I wouldn't try again, but I'm proud of my creation and would like to continue. Hopefully in the next one I'll do better. ^.^
     
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    All you can do is learn from your mistakes and improve :D
     
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    Pretty good, May need a little bit more detail but that's my opinion xD
     
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    If you basically read the comments above they will tell you what to do :') show off something that is different and will make you stand out.

    ~Thread closed
     
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